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'two Rings'

mutual care that started out of nothing now it means everything our love and devotion a blessed union now sealed with two rings our nurtured care developed we are forever one

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Harry Horsman

Date: 3/27/2011 11:29:00 PM

It's amazing what starts out of nothing Wilma, i know i found all of you poets here on soup! wonderful sentiment this poem, just love it. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/25/2011 6:10:00 PM

Stopping by to wish u a happy weekend Wilma luv.. hope u are enjoying warm weather ..it is snowing here ...oh...my poor plants..

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/25/2011 2:56:00 PM

Beautiful reminder of how blissful Marriage can be, Wilma! Have a great weekend, girl! Love, Annalise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/25/2011 1:24:00 PM

very touching and vivid in thoughts/ expressions, wilma... superb write with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/25/2011 11:05:00 AM

This sure would be a prefect verse to read for any wedding, missy! Are there wedding bells ringing any time soon? Don't forget to invite me please? haha I am inviting myself if not I am gate-crashing! shucks though you reckon I should start posting another ad soon? how you doing missy? hope all is well there near table mountain :) -- hugs to you :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2011 2:16:00 PM

Very nice,Wilma. It's not for any contest, is it? I enjoy reading these shortie poems you and others show here daily! LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2011 6:04:00 AM

thankxx Wilma.. still feasting on your dynamic words in this piece luv.. those two rings got to my heart luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/23/2011 12:50:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, if it's for the entry to my contest,

James Peranteau

Date: 3/23/2011 6:26:00 AM

How beautiful dear poet ! Many poets have taken their turn, writing poems about this union...and many have truly spell bound me with their writes...this one goes with those "other" great writes Wilma ! To mine favz if ya don't mind ! Have a great day my friend ! much love, james

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2011 5:01:00 PM

Nice wilma, imagine the beauty of a ring... like a precious relic combining two souls forever. Let's just praise them who know how to use it and keep the covenant of the ring...the.way it should.be.. well enjoyed anyway... take care..p.d.

James Fraser

Date: 3/22/2011 2:41:00 PM

The way marriage should be Wilma, nice Kimo sassy lady.....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/22/2011 5:58:00 AM

Lovely lines Wilma my friend on the theme for this contest ..good luck.. the two rings symbolize commitment to me and luv that Ron and I always wear ours ... as usual.... am super amazed at the brilliance of your poetry ... forever one.. YES! luv..

Daver Austin

Date: 3/22/2011 5:05:00 AM

Beautiful use of the form, Wilma. "Mutual care that started out of nothing." This rings true, the amazement and wonderfulness. Love, Dave

Kash Poet

Date: 3/22/2011 12:16:00 AM

This is excellent Wilma!Wonderfully you have done it!Goodluck in the contest---kash

David Byrne

Date: 3/21/2011 6:41:00 PM

charming : )

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/21/2011 5:18:00 PM

oh this is a beauty, Wilma ...sheesh now look what you went and made me do ...now I gotta look up KIMO ! : ) thanks for your lovely comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2011 3:36:00 PM

Very nicely done, Wilma. Exactly what I would expect from you!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/21/2011 2:27:00 PM

Touching and beautiful and over the top with love... nothing less then perfect.. love Michael

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/21/2011 1:01:00 PM

Thanks for the entry, Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/21/2011 12:57:00 PM

Glad that you are forever one...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting...I am slowly getting to feeling better..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 3/21/2011 11:20:00 AM

A lovely piece, Wilma. Memories of our wedding day always makes us laugh : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/21/2011 9:18:00 AM

Love does seem to spring from nowhere and suddenly it is the most important thing in our lives, Wilma. Dr. Ram will like this entry very much. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn

Poet Tacito

Date: 3/21/2011 9:13:00 AM

Wilma, this is a very touching piece. "Blessed union"...yes.