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'Two Rings'

mutual care that started out of nothing
  now it means everything
our love and devotion

a blessed union now sealed with two rings
   our nurtured care developed 
we are forever one 

Copyright © Wilma Neels

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  1. Date: 3/27/2011 11:29:00 PM
    It's amazing what starts out of nothing Wilma, i know i found all of you poets here on soup! wonderful sentiment this poem, just love it. Harry

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 6:10:00 PM
    Stopping by to wish u a happy weekend Wilma luv.. hope u are enjoying warm weather is snowing here poor plants..

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 2:56:00 PM
    Beautiful reminder of how blissful Marriage can be, Wilma! Have a great weekend, girl! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 1:24:00 PM
    very touching and vivid in thoughts/ expressions, wilma... superb write with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette

  1. Date: 3/25/2011 11:05:00 AM
    This sure would be a prefect verse to read for any wedding, missy! Are there wedding bells ringing any time soon? Don't forget to invite me please? haha I am inviting myself if not I am gate-crashing! shucks though you reckon I should start posting another ad soon? how you doing missy? hope all is well there near table mountain :) -- hugs to you :)

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 2:16:00 PM
    Very nice,Wilma. It's not for any contest, is it? I enjoy reading these shortie poems you and others show here daily! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 3/24/2011 6:04:00 AM
    thankxx Wilma.. still feasting on your dynamic words in this piece luv.. those two rings got to my heart luv..

  1. Date: 3/23/2011 12:50:00 PM
    Thanks for the entry, if it's for the entry to my contest,

  1. Date: 3/23/2011 6:26:00 AM
    How beautiful dear poet ! Many poets have taken their turn, writing poems about this union...and many have truly spell bound me with their writes...this one goes with those "other" great writes Wilma ! To mine favz if ya don't mind ! Have a great day my friend ! much love, james

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 5:01:00 PM
    Nice wilma, imagine the beauty of a ring... like a precious relic combining two souls forever. Let's just praise them who know how to use it and keep the covenant of the ring...the.way it well enjoyed anyway... take care..p.d.

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 2:41:00 PM
    The way marriage should be Wilma, nice Kimo sassy lady.....:)

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 5:58:00 AM
    Lovely lines Wilma my friend on the theme for this contest ..good luck.. the two rings symbolize commitment to me and luv that Ron and I always wear ours ... as usual.... am super amazed at the brilliance of your poetry ... forever one.. YES! luv..

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 5:05:00 AM
    Beautiful use of the form, Wilma. "Mutual care that started out of nothing." This rings true, the amazement and wonderfulness. Love, Dave

  1. Date: 3/22/2011 12:16:00 AM
    This is excellent Wilma!Wonderfully you have done it!Goodluck in the contest---kash

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 6:41:00 PM
    charming : )

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 5:18:00 PM
    oh this is a beauty, Wilma ...sheesh now look what you went and made me do I gotta look up KIMO ! : ) thanks for your lovely comment

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 3:36:00 PM
    Very nicely done, Wilma. Exactly what I would expect from you!

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 2:27:00 PM
    Touching and beautiful and over the top with love... nothing less then perfect.. love Michael

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 1:01:00 PM
    Thanks for the entry, Wilma

  1. Date: 3/21/2011 12:57:00 PM
    Glad that you are forever one...Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting...I am slowly getting to feeling better..Sara