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Two Poems About the Iroquois

Ruler of the Cataracts-Maiden of the Mist The thundering waters of the Niagara. Voice of the mighty spirits of the water. The natives believed and yearly sacrificed a white canoe with fruit and flowers and a chosen daughter, until the Christians came and told them Jesus paid. Not until Lela-Wala, an only child and motherless, was chosen did the practice subside. After she dived, her father Chief Eagle ran out of the woods and followed her. 1/11/2022 HANDSOME LAKE He was born as Hadawa'ko “Shaking Snow.” Handsome’s half-brother was Cornplanter. My heritage from People of the Longhouse — John married Margaret, a French woman. She birthed Helen, my great-great-great grandma. Together they lived on a reservation. Handsome was born in 1735 in a Seneca village on the Genesee River into the Turtle Clan — later he was adopted into the Wolf Clan. Doubtless my relatives knew of Handsome Lake. He signed the U.S. treaty with the Six Nations. 1/11/2022 Referenced Wikipedia.com and webwinds.com

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Date: 1/19/2022 9:38:00 AM
Wow, Kim. I like the reference to showing these Iroquois that Jesus had already paid a price. No need to sacrifice beautiful daughters. This is an amazing poem, well-crafted.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2022 9:55:00 AM
Thank you! When we live by faith and not by fear we see the beauty and power of God’s creation! God bless you, Carol Moon!
Date: 1/12/2022 10:22:00 AM
Enjoyed your historical verses Kim, very informative. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 2:01:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! I don’t tend to write in historic rhyme like you do but glad you liked. :)
Date: 1/11/2022 11:52:00 PM
Exquisite poems. You carried out your research well and produced two great poems. Hugs xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/11/2022 10:55:00 PM
Love it ... A creative, heartfelt, history-adjusting write. Luv what u achieved here, Kim. Peace, Chesed
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/12/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you, Anil!
Date: 1/11/2022 7:15:00 PM
That first poem reads like a 'real' Native American narrative. Excellent representational write, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 7:45:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 1/11/2022 6:07:00 PM
Wow! Two wonderful stories. Ila, my wife, has some Cherokee blood. I once helped a departed medicine-man finally ascend, after many years him being trapped on the earth -- it was quite something. Powerful spirit!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 6:13:00 PM
You always share interesting info, dear Joe! Thank you!
Date: 1/11/2022 5:31:00 PM
Two lovely, informative and interesting poems, Kim. Thanks for sharing. :-) Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 6:12:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!

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