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Two Perspectives: I See, I Feel For Pd's In One Line Contest

(I SEE) anchored by stone spire, rising above ocean's swell; guidance her vision 5-7-5 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (I FEEL) standing in shadows, shouldering the weight of waves; I am moon's harbour 5-7-5 For Poem Destroyer's Contest "In One Line" MONOKU Written March 27 2016

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Eve Roper

Date: 4/4/2016 9:29:00 AM

J.T., congratulations on your win!

J. Tudor
Date: 4/4/2016 8:44:00 PM

I appreciate it Eve, and Thank You kindly. :) J.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2016 3:30:00 PM

wow, yours is the most amazing of them all, that second one I am talking about. It's stunning. You were only supposed to do see OR feel, not both. Maybe that is why it is not a top win, because for me , that second one is the BEST. Congrats.

J. Tudor
Date: 4/2/2016 6:36:00 PM

I am humbled by your comments Andrea, truly. Actually my placement exceeded my expectations, and in truth my goal was to work at overcoming my social phobia, and a part of me was hoping I wouldn't place at all!! But it was good to have my mind exercised. Again, thank you kindly. :) J.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 4/1/2016 8:04:00 AM

When you write J. Tudor, I really feel your overflowing passion in writing! You inspire so many people with your works and I'm so lucky I'm one of them! Thank you so much! Congratulations! :) _HANS

J. Tudor
Date: 4/2/2016 6:22:00 PM

Thank you Hans for your efflorescent comment!! J.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 1:40:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Tudor..

J. Tudor
Date: 4/2/2016 6:18:00 PM

Thank you Upma, your words encourage me. J.

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/31/2016 4:01:00 PM

Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

J. Tudor
Date: 3/31/2016 6:55:00 PM

Thank you BL for taking the time to leave a message...you made me smile. J.

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/31/2016 6:19:00 AM

Nicely written! Congrats.

J. Tudor
Date: 3/31/2016 6:53:00 PM

Thanks Tom...kind of you to say. J.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2016 12:32:00 AM

J. Tudor, Congratulations on your Awesome Win. Stop by my blog "Invading," if you'd like. Drop a smile and tell me a little about your Monoku :) Always & Forever ~LINDA~

J. Tudor
Date: 3/31/2016 6:58:00 PM

Thank you Linda...it was a great prompt that you provided, and I thank you for your consideration. :) J.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/28/2016 11:54:00 PM

A double whammy, Mr. J. I don't know if two lines are allowed or not, but what the heck ... they're both good. A bit more privy to the FEEL one, however ... "shouldering the weight of waves" is a powerful line, methinks.

J. Tudor
Date: 3/29/2016 5:38:00 PM

I inquired before submitting them both, however, upon reflection I probably should have separated them into individual posts...oh well, it will be accepted...or not. I will live. ! J.