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Two People In Love

When A Man Love’s A Woman
When a man love’s a woman he brings ease, sincerity and forgiveness are found- Seeks adoring beauty no one else sees, with an absolute love knowing no bounds. He treats her with respect and compassion, reveals inner vulnerability- Embraces her body with true passion, and listens to her continually. Spending one day with her, a dream come true, spending two days, heaven in the making- And during the thunder the skies are blue, as he’s giving more than he is taking. Loving a woman is not hard to do- When a woman loves a man just like you. When A Woman Loves A Man When a woman loves a man, she falls deep, a wall that had been built may then fall down- She writes of him then can’t really sleep, for true love in her soft heart has been found. When days are bad she calls to say, “love you”, when nights are sad she holds her teddy bear- His soft fur reminds her of love so true, you know, that teddy he won at the fair. When feelings are hurt, she weeps in the night, when apologies are made she forgives- When he sees darkness in him, she sees light, and she prays forever they both can live. Loving a man is so simple, you see- When my man loves a woman just like me. Two English Sonnets Contest December 28, 2016

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Date: 1/8/2017 8:20:00 AM
I love your sonnets, especially how your final two lines in both are so wonderfully similar! Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/29/2016 12:25:00 AM
Beautiful, no one could explain the two sides of love better than you:) a 7:)
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Date: 12/28/2016 11:30:00 AM
Really nicely done, flip the coin and still...it is how we love the other that matters. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/28/2016 11:24:00 AM
Beautifully written Laura, I think you've explained both sides of love here!!! Best Wishes Kevin
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