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bodies of water blue planet personified to sink or to swim July 18, 2014 Contest:Hiaku on probabilities Sponsor: Marvin Celestial

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:01:00 PM

I'm going with living...:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 8:32:00 AM

Back again wid big congrats dear Arlene on this winning lovely haiku!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 8/9/2014 11:13:00 AM

lovely take on the theme, Arlene. Mohan

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 10:15:00 PM

Nice thought well expressed, Arlene. congrats

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 6:53:00 PM

lovely haiku congrats on your placement in the contest:-) Hugs jan x

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/5/2014 8:06:00 PM

You stuck to the 5 7 5 format which is good. Our blue planet has room for poets it seems. Good job! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2014 10:17:00 PM

I love how you made this a symbol for our way of surviving on the planet. VERy nicely done, my friend.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/20/2014 8:31:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Robert Nehls

Date: 7/19/2014 9:09:00 PM

To sink or to swim. That pretty much sums it up, Arlene. Great haiku, my friend...... Robert.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/19/2014 9:23:00 PM

Thanks, dear Robert! Hugs... Arlene

Arlene Smith

Date: 7/19/2014 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Connie! Nice to meet you too.. Hope you find something you enjoy.. Hugs.. Arlene

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/19/2014 3:24:00 AM

So original and sure to do well in the contest Arlene. I am off to read more of your work. Very nice to meet you!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/19/2014 8:28:00 AM

Connie! Your reply is above. Lol.. I do this often... :-)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/19/2014 1:36:00 AM

Oh that's lovely Arlene! gl in contest !

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/19/2014 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, dear Upma!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Jack Horne

Date: 7/18/2014 2:13:00 PM

clever haiku - sure to be a winner : )

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, dear Jack! Hugs... Arlene