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'two of Us'

Let's stand out here, Just the two of us Leave the world inside the four walls Let's make love out there Just the two of us Pretend all the hustle of life does not exist We could do with some time alone Just the two of us No networks, no phones, no facebook, Just the two of us you and I wrapped up in all that is us Let’s start today... ©134329012013

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Ifeanyi Bob Ekechukwu

Date: 10/3/2013 1:50:00 AM

Really thrilling and romantic...could feel the sensation. Takia missy. Hugs. Baron of Ebullion

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2013 11:42:00 PM

this is beautiful and makes me wonder. is this what you were up to when I did not see you around for a while??

David Williams

Date: 2/18/2013 12:00:00 PM

Wilma this is brill, I just love the directness of it...David

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/11/2013 1:53:00 AM

Hi Wilma,so sorry I haven't stopped by in awhile...I've been busy writing instead of reading.I love the msg you have here."No networks,no phones,no facebook." YES!! :o)

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 2/1/2013 2:48:00 PM

Lovely poem!

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/1/2013 4:14:00 AM

just love your invitation Wilma, and of course your wonderful poetry never disappoints.. take care...,Harry

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/29/2013 8:17:00 PM

Sounds like a plan most of us could dream of Wilma, that one special person makes such a difference in our lives. Love, Elizabeth

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/29/2013 6:31:00 PM

Beautiful! I love this Wilma...two hearts meeting in the same place... My favorite stanza..."...you and I wrapped up in all that is us..." Great job! Love, Annalise