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'Two of Us'

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'Two of Us'

Let's stand out here, Just the two of us Leave the world inside the four walls Let's make love out there Just the two of us Pretend all the hustle of life does not exist We could do with some time alone Just the two of us No networks, no phones, no facebook, Just the two of us you and I wrapped up in all that is us Let’s start today...

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  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:50:00 AM
    Really thrilling and romantic...could feel the sensation. Takia missy. Hugs. Baron of Ebullion

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 11:42:00 PM
    this is beautiful and makes me wonder. is this what you were up to when I did not see you around for a while??

  1. Date: 2/18/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Wilma this is brill, I just love the directness of it...David

  1. Date: 2/11/2013 1:53:00 AM
    Hi Wilma,so sorry I haven't stopped by in awhile...I've been busy writing instead of reading.I love the msg you have here."No networks,no phones,no facebook." YES!! :o)

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 2:48:00 PM
    Lovely poem!

  1. Date: 2/1/2013 4:14:00 AM
    just love your invitation Wilma, and of course your wonderful poetry never disappoints.. take care...,Harry

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 8:17:00 PM
    Sounds like a plan most of us could dream of Wilma, that one special person makes such a difference in our lives. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:31:00 PM
    Beautiful! I love this Wilma...two hearts meeting in the same place... My favorite stanza..." and I wrapped up in all that is us..." Great job! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 2:46:00 PM
    precise message for a pair of ear, intimacy a premium, like it.

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 12:47:00 PM
    This is a very tenderhearted write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:57:00 AM
    Take care of each other and the love - Beautiful Wilma! - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 1/29/2013 6:29:00 AM
    Beautiful poem, yes indeed sometimes we just need time for two, love Elizabeth