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Two Moons To One

You closed yours eyes before the crash.. We woke in places that couldn't last.. Blinded by fables that we hoped were true.. Now our hands let go as your star flew.. In your own sky without my light.. Your star shines all too bright.. Till another day when our moons are one.. I'll sit to the side making sounds of none.. For Brian's contest

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/25/2011 2:29:00 PM

playing catch up on my comments from a few days ago and saw the one from Feeling U.. oh Michael..how sweet to put your name in that corner and match every line with your name luv.. u connect to my vibes so free and easy it is rather refreshing... and exciting...and stimulating... Ron and I are talking at the beach.. but...he is on a short leash..and I mean it ... your Jersey Girl in determined mode ..always with luv..luv.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 11:25:00 AM

michael, this is goood stuff..applause for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/11/2011 4:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Michael in Brian Strand's "Poeta" contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 5:45:00 PM

more congrats in order Michael for this fantastic win ... an awesome poem which tugs at the heart ..mine especially luv.. always and forever your Jersey Girl... with two moons to one luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/9/2011 6:59:00 AM

oh so sweet to see u enjoying my poetry as I so adore yours Michael luv.. I added some special words to my Pixie Passion piece for effect .. so hope it flies in the contest .. appreciate your special and kind words so complimentary ..I feel the very same toward your body...of work... double entondre ..if u please..haha.. we are beach bound today as it is gorgeous and my Venus already knows the word "beach".. for a doggie she is preety savvy..hope u guys are enjoying too..luv.. forever ..always.

Dinda Minardi

Date: 7/8/2011 6:50:00 AM

This is very sad, Michael. Whooow, touching poem you got here dear! Nice weekend :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/8/2011 4:56:00 AM

Quite a sad write and yet it has a glimmer of hope attached to it Michael, would love to know what inspired this one :) love ya Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/7/2011 5:10:00 PM

deep reflections in this piece Michael... wonderful parallels my friend... your Jersey Girl in thunderstorm mode tonight with electric flickeering on again off again.. and Venus is wondering what's up..haha..

Juanita Warden

Date: 7/7/2011 1:59:00 PM

I feel it every word...

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/7/2011 1:59:00 PM

Sad but profound expressions, Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/7/2011 1:28:00 PM

Oh, Michael, this is so sad and touching. I hope this is not based on a personal loss, but it did feel like you lost a child. Beautiful writing! Love, Carolyn