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Two Lost Souls

two lost souls under the piles of hay dancing together "Sexy Haiku Contest" November 12, 2012

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Michael Dom

Date: 3/1/2013 6:43:00 AM

I like this haiku. Uhuh.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2012 8:18:00 PM

MariaStopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/15/2012 3:28:00 AM

Maria, this was cute - well written - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2012 5:11:00 PM

hmm, i just saw the winners list and don't recall this was on it. Did it not win? I still really like it seeing it again.!!

Len Gasun

Date: 11/13/2012 10:31:00 AM

Hi, Mary! Sorry for the late read but this is really beautiful! I love it! And, who are those two lost souls hmmnnnn? Great write and I'm sure a winner! Ops, is this late for the contest? Ok good luck always! I spent my time on the winner's list trying to congratulate the winners but stil undone. My PC runs so slow, whew! I'll come back tom. ok. See you my dear friend. Good night and good morning ;))! love always, LG