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Two Lenses Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick Christmas was sadly over, then New Years Eve started calling, parties at papa Joe's, singing and dancing, the snow was falling Party hats, confetti and balloons, such a dream come true, me sipping on cheap grape juice with my cousin Betty Sue. Running around in circles to old songs from nineteen sixty five, my favorite memory is when my favorite Auntie Ivy would arrive! She'd cut my favorite chocolate cake with gramma's heirloom knife not knowing as an adult that Eve would the worst day of my life. The day started out fine, but I had a feeling that would change, my sister had been depressed and her mood was very strange. I dropped her off at the mall near by trusting she would come home, but since that night my life has changed, I would forever be alone. Calling her...Calling her...I kept calling her...over and over again, at exactly three o'clock, I knew I would never see my best friend. Days flew..weeks...months...oh how much did I cry and grieve, As a child I'd never guessed how much I'd dislike New Years Eve. Date Written: February 26, 2016

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Date: 2/29/2016 9:10:00 AM
Don't apologize for what you were inspired to write..I could feel the emotion in this one..It is sad to loose a loved one on any occasion in which we usually celebrate..Sara
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/29/2016 9:28:00 AM
Thank you once again Sara, you are very sweet :)-luloo
Date: 2/29/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
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Date: 2/29/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you Sara very much, I am honored you enjoyed it :)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 7:30:00 PM
Well-written, heart-wrenching. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 2/28/2016 3:28:00 PM
So so heartbreakingly sad LoLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2016 8:07:00 AM
Touched by your words, Luloo. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/28/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Bobby...:)-luloo
Date: 2/28/2016 3:27:00 AM
This is sad, Laura. No New Year's eve will ever be the same again. ~ Congratulations on yet another win:) Regards // paul
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2016 10:42:00 AM
Thank you Paul :)-luloo
Date: 2/27/2016 5:33:00 PM
So very sad, Laura Loo, but wonderfully written in a way that really touched my heart. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 2/27/2016 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartbreaking rhyme! Well done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/28/2016 10:41:00 AM
Thank you Susan :)-luloo
Date: 2/27/2016 4:16:00 PM
This really pulls at the heart strings so very sad. Terribly sorry for the loss of your sister.
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Date: 2/28/2016 10:40:00 AM
Thank you Carol :)-luloo
Date: 2/26/2016 7:48:00 PM
wow, Laura, yours is a somber one and very well crafted. I think it is one of the best I have seen. So sorry for your loss. i have four sisters and this is a call I will never have to make or receive.
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Date: 2/27/2016 1:24:00 PM
Thank you and be grateful for every second with your sisters. There is nothing like a relationship with our sisters... :)-luloo

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