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Two Lenses

Running While soaring in the sky and breathing below water Standing While climbing mountains and exploring lands Running While sky gets harder to reach and water gets treacherous Standing While brooding of mountain tasks and perilous new lands. © Rohaan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/5/2016 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations! beautiful, like others also. Kamaal kar diya! ;)
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Date: 3/5/2016 1:40:00 PM
stranger, but now friend... you too, Rohaan.. expression of a poet-;)
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 3/5/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thankyou so much stranger-but-now-friend!!
Date: 3/5/2016 4:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win... Linda
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 3/5/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank You so much Linda!
Date: 2/29/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara..This one is unique in style and composition..I enjoyed reading it..
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 3/1/2016 8:24:00 AM
Ma'am it is my honor. I am happy you liked it. Next time I will make sure you love it...
Date: 2/28/2016 8:01:00 AM
and perilous new land ... wonderful. Hugs, Bobby
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/28/2016 10:15:00 AM
Thanks. Hugs back. I am happy you liked it.
Date: 2/27/2016 5:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading.
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/27/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thankyou so much.
Date: 2/25/2016 9:00:00 PM
yes, definitely two different lenses on this one, Rohaan. Good luck in this fun challenge.
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/26/2016 5:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea.
Date: 2/25/2016 2:21:00 PM
Rohaan, well done on the free verse poem. I think the reflection above and under are great. This is an excellent poem. Keep posting. LINDA
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Rohaan Suresh
Date: 2/26/2016 5:53:00 AM
Thank You so much Linda..

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