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Climbing trees was my passion, oaks with hard bark I climbed; looking below, I saw myself dangling from a rope, so different was the feeling of elation I got from being shut off all sound... mom screamed, she thought I was a crazy dope! That adventure is a memory kept by time, no longer I can easily climb another tall tree; I have the fear of falling, not being stunk by a bee, and missing all the excitement, I break down... feeling angry at myself for not trying again: it's not easy as singing a happy jumping-rhyme!

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Date: 3/5/2016 4:59:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 2/27/2016 10:20:00 PM
Haha... Lovely write, Andrew. Very true. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:51:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work and how you have changed over the years..It was fun being that little boy..Congrats on your placement..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading.
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