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Two Left Feet

A sprinkle A dribble Unravel something that was simple Words like holograms Giving you stunning visuals Golden glowing sands Exotic overflowing lands Like a blind man I read your poetry beauty with curious hands Chopped up small bits of romance She loves high class fragrances from France Caught in whirlwind dance of a love trance No other way to end this poem But in a spinning b-boy stance Peace

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Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/29/2014 11:03:00 PM

Superb Seb!!Who doesnt like high class fragrances from France.. I do..But I love to wander in the simple life of the markets,getting a bargain too. I love this line-I read your poetry beauty with curious hands-The exploring of each verse..Yes we all love to explore the poet's mind..Don't We.Excellent Seb. Its 6am.here..So Off.I go to sleep..Soon to wake up again.. Goodnight dear friend!Charma :.)

Sebastian Aaron Baez
Date: 11/29/2014 11:16:00 PM

Sweet dreams lovely and beautiful Charmaine sweet wonderful dreams enchanting beauty queen, sorry if that was too much I'm in a really good mood tonight. It's time for me to sleep as well.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/29/2014 11:05:00 PM

Like a blind man..forgot that part in my comment..I liked that line too :.)