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Two Heads of Janus

Blessed with two heads Welcoming new aims to view Review-renew old Quietness all around Secret actions in full swing Impregnating soil. +++++++ May 7, 2014 Form: Haiku Dr. Ram Mehta Fifth Place win Contest: Two haiku on January by Irma, Skat-A

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:10:00 AM

INTERESTING

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/8/2014 11:34:00 PM

Wonderfully altogether differently done Dr Ram ! Congrats on win !

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/8/2014 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations Dr. Ram on fine win. Unique and different from other Haikus in the contest. Mohan

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2014 5:44:00 PM

Congratulations, pd

A.E. Rivenbark

Date: 6/8/2014 5:17:00 PM

Yes! I love this, love, love mythology and this a great take on Janus. Congrats on your win :D

Paul Callus

Date: 6/8/2014 1:59:00 PM

Two strong haiku, Dr! maybe the second slightly better than the first. Congrats on your win. // paul

Joseph May

Date: 6/8/2014 12:48:00 PM

Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/8/2014 10:24:00 AM

Congratulations on another fine win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2014 10:22:00 AM

I seem to be liking mostly the second haiku in the ones that are pairs. Yours too. It's very deep with meaning. Congrats for win.

Theresa Stephens

Date: 6/8/2014 9:17:00 AM

Hi Dr Ram, Congrats on your placement. Enjoyed reading your poems. Poetic ' food for thought ' indeed. All the best Theresa xx

Skat A

Date: 6/8/2014 8:35:00 AM

DR........ :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 6/8/2014 9:38:00 AM

Thanks, Skat, for the appreciation

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/29/2014 12:06:00 PM

Interesting pair of haikus as the second one appears to serve as the juxtaposition to the first and the space between them serves as the kireji, hence rather than two haikus, it is one 6 line haiku. Cheers, Roy

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/13/2014 6:03:00 PM

Hi Dr.Ram, I really enjoyed this excellent poem. Best of best to you and thank you for sharing this write With us here. Thank you for your well wishes on my featured write. Love and Peace, Deborah

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/10/2014 6:52:00 PM

Deep but well worth the read, love the second part the best great job, take care glad I read this today. cheri

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/9/2014 8:39:00 PM

I like your haiku, Dr. Ram! Correct me if I'm wrong but the way I see it, instead of the cold stillness, you've chosen to portray creation and life for the January Haikus contest. :)

Daver Austin

Date: 5/9/2014 11:12:00 AM

Love your birth of spring. Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2014 9:41:00 PM

very nice, I especially liked the second one, Dr. Ram.