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Two Heads Are Better Than One

A modern day scenario of Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden. It’s after dinner and Eve has washed the dishes while Adam's disappeared to the den…communication is minimal...the boys are off somewhere..everybody's doing "their thing". The old serpent..he's got all his bases covered - the internet, so many distractions..total disconnect, no communication...he's thinking: 'O, this is easy! Divide the family and conquer!'...He's got it going..or so he thinks..but he forgets that he doesn't hold the "Ace" card. All this is temporary! “Adam, are you listening to me?” How’s the budget coming on?” “We have to have a budget in place so life can be manageable.” “No, not later, not tomorrow, honey!” “Tomorrow’s too far in the future for this to wait.” “Oh! What’s that you said?” “Did I hear you right?” “I should make a budget, that whatever I do is fine by you?” “Babe, let’s work on it together. Here, I’ve got all we need to start.” “Oh, you’re too busy, right now?” “Ok, I’ll do it, then.” “Adam, where are the boys?” “Have you seen them today?” “What are you doing?” “Shouldn’t you be out there with them?” “I can’t be running things around here and watching the boys, too.” “Someone has to keep an eye on them; see what they’re up to.” “Are you listening to me?” “No, I’m not nagging..” “I’m just gently reminding you that what’s left undone today, Will come back tomorrow and bite you in the butt!” Soon, Cain murdered Abel...... "Adam, now that Cain has killed Abel, we have..nothing" "No need for me to stay around here" "Good bye" Another lesson for mankind, but will we ever learn That two heads are better than one? Without balance nothing works as it should! *To Any Present day Adam totally disconnected from family *For Deborah Guzzi's "Eve in the Garden of Eden" Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/31/2010 9:04:00 PM
Congrats on your HM my BBF in Debbie's contest... enjoy your great honor tonight..luv.. Linda-Marie.. having eye surgery tomorrow.. mini prayers please..luv.. thankxxx..
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Date: 5/30/2010 3:12:00 PM
Thank you for supporting the contest! Please label your form narrative...and put an * with the name of what Adam you are speaking to...your own persona Adam or one of Linda's Adam's?
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:43:00 AM
This is GREAT ...good luck in the contest.. I entered too even though I am running the ADAMS crazy contest..haha.. they luv it... my entry is The First Lady of Paradise... I included all the Adams that had entered to date... all in except for the latest last one today... hope u have a good laught... EVE is so naughty in mine... but it was really for fun more than anything... luv your take on the topic... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:10:00 PM
I enjoyed this flowing version Audrey. . Awesome. .Hey dear the title oops,Charma.
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