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Two Hands Keeping Warm

two hands keeping warm.. fingers searching without sight pocketed as one..

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Eiken Laan

Date: 1/3/2011 12:18:00 PM

Oh this is really special, I love the fingers without sight, pocketed as one, beautiful love captured in this moment.

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/3/2011 6:55:00 AM

Awesome senryu, love the image you bring to life in this one.. Love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/2/2011 8:18:00 PM

only one word to say ... YEAH!!!! J.G. to W.K.with luv forever and always.. even tough it is meaningless ..Coughlin will stay on.. YEAH!!!!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/1/2011 9:54:00 AM

Excellent thoughts penned..Two are mostly always better than one..Enjoyed..My spirits were lifted at your presence at my blog..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2011 1:20:00 AM

oh, wow, I love this. I am a "handsies" girl.It was my favorite activity when I was a teenager dating! A big FAV

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/31/2010 2:14:00 PM

Yeah, these hands know how to find warmth in the making of unity ,,, happy new year, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/31/2010 1:00:00 PM

Are u going to enter the John Heck contest with a new lyric for an Elton John song luv? I just did mine and hope u like ... if u get a moment to read.. tell Roseanna I am rooting for her Jets this week... anything New York is OK with the "Sweetheart" ... Jersey Girl forever and always..luv..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/31/2010 11:30:00 AM

I liked this. The dots at the end of the line are used in this form to indicate a change in the stream of thought and only 1 change is asked for so you would leave the dots off line 2. Having a title is cheating LOL and because of the great job you did unecessary. For P.S. just put line 1 in the title line when entering the verse EXCELLENT senyru!

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 12/31/2010 10:02:00 AM

Hello Michael, This is beautiful and so full of love. You are quite the writer ya know. Have a Happy New Year Michael, love and blessings to you and yours always Lov, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/31/2010 5:37:00 AM

Soup Mail W.K. from J.G. with luv..

James Peranteau

Date: 12/31/2010 5:35:00 AM

A warm Senryu Sir ! Such a nice thought to start the New year with ! Happy New Year to you and yours dear poet ! much love, james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/31/2010 5:30:00 AM

Tender loving feelings expressed in these three lines of intensity Michael.. such a romantic picture my friend... a special read early morning and so to relate to the entire day .. always u thrill me in every way my W.K. from your Jersey Girl with luv forever and always...H.N.Y... again and again...