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Two Feathers

Two Feathers If Thou allow the bird, Its found feathers to tell of its serving Its part in this earthy food chain, Thou will, too, allow its reward to be To sing again its sublime song - somewhere.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/27/2016 2:41:00 PM
very nice, Sunlite Wanter! The title is so fitting.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/27/2016 5:52:00 PM
I surely appreciate your dipping in and commenting.
Date: 9/27/2016 1:07:00 PM
ohh, this is bittersweet,,, i hope your birds are alright!.. a beauty, sun..huggs
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Date: 9/27/2016 5:52:00 PM
Thank you! They are usually blue jay feathers, and blue jays are tough so it may have got away.
Date: 9/26/2016 10:40:00 AM
wow Sunlite beautiful and I can hear a melody behind your words...your name is so pretty :)-luloo
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment about the poem and my "name."
Date: 9/25/2016 7:04:00 PM
Yes, I never collect my feathers from a killing field.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/27/2016 5:50:00 PM
Thank you. I guess you have birds, too.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2016 5:56:00 PM
Thank you so much.

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