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Two Faces

TWO FACES Two faces has the eternal sea, seven seas speak many languages but love has one voice and open hands. The endless love I have for thee a million tongues cannot speak yet booms and rings across the open lands. Whispers on the propitious breeze, volumes written with naked words recall stones and honour found on golden bands. Two faces has the broken sea, two arms to hold but not hold me, two lips to kiss tenderly, two eyes to see that don’t see me. For the contest: In love with someone and it not being returned. Rhyme scheme: a,b,c,d,a,e,f,d.a,g,h,d,a,a,a,a

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Date: 5/2/2017 9:06:00 PM
This is beautiful. Keep up the amazing work
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Date: 3/31/2017 10:15:00 PM
Such sorrow in your lovely words. I love the line "but love has one voice and open hands." It's one to say 'wish I thought of it' It's so beautiful.:-) Exquisite writing:-) blessings xx
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Phil Capitano
Date: 4/1/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much Lynn Marie for your thoughtful comment. Namaste.
Date: 3/30/2017 6:04:00 AM
That is good and your poetry face is seen and appreciated. Happy Spring in Canada, Kai
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Date: 3/29/2017 6:30:00 AM
Wonderful piece!! Congrats Phil, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 3/23/2017 5:31:00 AM
i never like to see 'thee' in a poem! lol but apart from that, i like this a lot..."love has one voice and open hands" is a very good line...thanks for commenting on my work
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Date: 3/22/2017 8:53:00 AM
Well penned, Phil!! Good luck with the contest man.
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