Two Days

Tuesday, July 02, 2013 The sun peeks out from the thick clouds Those beams of light stream bright Its heat been tamed for a few days Please fog use your veil's might Today solid gray clouds are back Wednesday July 03, 2013 They release some moisture Which waters the good earth's green grass Coolness its grand gesture Heavy rain is suspose to come Laden tropical air It will fill the rivers and creeks And none it will spare We are having a front being fed By moisture coming out of the Gulf..

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Skat A

Date: 7/4/2013 12:30:00 AM

Sara, "tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"

April Gabriella

Date: 7/3/2013 2:51:00 PM

Hello Sara! You've got some soup mail. :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/3/2013 12:01:00 PM

thr rains here are foggy and come from the pacific coast, sandra...how you describe the climate is lyrical and sensient... remarkable.. hope you are good!..:) hugggs

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/3/2013 5:57:00 AM

I understand this phenomenon as I lived in Texas and got moisture from the Gulf quite frequently...though maybe not a frequently as you do! I just love your description of this event, from a semi-sunny day to a cloudy day, both maybe foggy! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece that you have written my friend, such a enlightening poem, Great Work!!