Two Days

Tuesday, July 02, 2013

The sun peeks out from the thick clouds
Those beams of light stream bright
Its heat been tamed for a few days
Please fog use your veil's might

Today solid gray clouds are back     Wednesday July 03, 2013
They release some moisture
Which waters the good earth's green grass
Coolness its grand gesture  

Heavy rain is suspose to come
Laden tropical air
It will fill the rivers and creeks
And none it will spare

We are having a front being fed 
By moisture coming out of the Gulf..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/4/2013 12:30:00 AM
Sara, "tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"
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Date: 7/3/2013 2:51:00 PM
Hello Sara! You've got some soup mail. :)
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Date: 7/3/2013 12:01:00 PM
thr rains here are foggy and come from the pacific coast, sandra...how you describe the climate is lyrical and sensient... remarkable.. hope you are good!..:) hugggs
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Date: 7/3/2013 5:57:00 AM
I understand this phenomenon as I lived in Texas and got moisture from the Gulf quite frequently...though maybe not a frequently as you do! I just love your description of this event, from a semi-sunny day to a cloudy day, both maybe foggy! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a tremendous piece that you have written my friend, such a enlightening poem, Great Work!!
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