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Two Closely Born Sons

Still just in diapers himself and already his brother’s keeper; Logan watches lovingly as Lucas naps in sleepers. Perhaps it’s in his DNA or the symptoms of a first born son, But Logan has bonded with his little brother more than any one. He was fascinated with Mommy’s belly, knowing a brother grew within; His head he laid upon her bump and would carefully listen. The first day they brought Lucas home he watched his brother cry And promised in his little head that being a good brother he would try. Future years will bring competitiveness and perhaps a fight or two, But Logan always will be the older brother that Lucas can look up to. It starts when they are very young, sharing toys and hand-me-down clothes; The bond formed between two closely born sons nobody else can know. by Joe Flach For the "Brotherly Love" contest Written and posted on 5/3/2011

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Date: 5/26/2011 11:51:00 PM
big time cheers for the hip, hip win, joe.. just amazing!..:) hugggs
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Date: 5/25/2011 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations Joe on your win in the "Brotherly Love" contest sponsored by Miranda Lambert. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2011 9:10:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Joe. Awesome piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/24/2011 8:00:00 AM
So cute the way you describe Logan listening to his mom's belly in anticipation of havig a new brother. Sure, there will be competitiveness and maybe some arguments, but you describe their bond so well! Congratulations on you win, Joe. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:59:00 AM
I might have beat you this time Joe but I know the competition when I read one. Mike
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Date: 5/24/2011 7:51:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your great win in the Brotherly Love contest with this excellent entry on kinship and luv.. my friend.. enjoy another top spot with luv..
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Date: 5/18/2011 1:31:00 PM
Good poem and good luck in the contest. I entered it as well but without the experience of having a brother or sons.
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Date: 5/3/2011 12:28:00 PM
absolutely heartwarming, dear joe... you wrote this which much soul! winning wishes to you. :) huggs, nette
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