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Two Butterflies

Two butterflies parted ways on a warm, spring day each with their own dream to fulfill the monarch, in all its glory dreamed of dancing on the breeze a vision of beauty admired by all floating weightless and free with no particular destination but bringing joy with each graceful flutter the blue pansy, of little glory, dreamed of home in a garden never to roam with no fanfare drinking sweet nectar and pollinating her world but bringing joy with each new blossom two butterflies each with their own dream to share
By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, February 24, 2012 for Free Verse Contest (PD) 11th place

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Date: 2/25/2012 9:20:00 AM
congrats on your win....~sashi
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:50:00 PM
Thanks Sashi!
Date: 2/25/2012 7:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D's "Free Verse~Poem" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol"
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:49:00 PM
Thanks Carol!
Date: 2/25/2012 6:51:00 AM
Rhonda, I really like this beautiful write. I know many people like both butterflies :) I enjoyed reading this to start my day. Love, Jon
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:49:00 PM
Thanks for reading, Jon!
Date: 2/24/2012 11:26:00 PM
I love butterflies and they bring such a delight to our world and such a message of salvation and transformation. Beautiful words Rhonda, thank you also for your kind words on my work. Blessings, Bren: )
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:48:00 PM
Thank you Brenda for your kind words always! Blessings, Rhonda
Date: 2/24/2012 9:01:00 PM
congrats Rhonda on an excellent write and win luv.. butterflies are free and very beautiful as this piece ..
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:47:00 PM
Thank you, Linda-Marie!
Date: 2/24/2012 8:53:00 PM
RHONDA~CONGRATUALTIONS! with your free verse poem *^* thank you for supporting my contest ;-) ~ always*PD
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:46:00 PM
Thank you PD for the placement on your contest!
Date: 2/24/2012 2:55:00 PM
Rhonda this was a joy to read , i enjoyed so much thank you , best of luck in the contest , Hugs and best wishes , Declan xx
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:45:00 PM
Thanks, Declan!
Date: 2/24/2012 2:43:00 PM
Nicely done Rhonda. I love butterflies. They are my fave thing. I wrote one called The Butterfly. God Bless, JB
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Judy!
Date: 2/24/2012 7:34:00 AM
Very nice...wish Id written it...lol...BG
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Barbara!
Date: 2/24/2012 6:31:00 AM
That is quite the prettiest poem I read for a long long time. I like the underlying destiny theme as well. Full marks for this one - good luck in the contest
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 2/25/2012 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Nick!

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