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Two Brothers

1969, two boys on the run But on the run To have much fun Monday night, Boys Brigade Where on this evening A life will fade The older by two years Could ran very fast The youngest in the race Just couldn't last Corner turned I'll catch up you'll see Where you are I want to be To reach that corner I ran and ran As I lifted my head My brother hit by a van As I reach the road I hear screams above the brakes Screeching tyres As my world all breaks My brother of nine Dragged for fifty yards Under a van Body skinned and tarred I stand there trembling In fear and tears Slow motion engulfs me As I shuffle near Panic sets as I turn and run Past the corner Where it all began Running back to my father Shouting Boom Booms dead Images running through my head My beloved brother Who could run faster than thee His life taken in front of me To see what I seen Just a boy of seven Watching Angels take his brother to heaven . http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/me.php

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Date: 12/30/2023 12:21:00 PM
Very creative enjoyed reading your work.
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Date: 12/25/2023 2:38:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/13/2014 7:14:00 AM
its hard indeed. :( i am a nurse and have handled lots of accident cases patients need to appear all dtrong but inside :(... heartfelt.
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James Fraser
Date: 10/13/2014 4:12:00 PM
Yes indeed, you must have seen many sights in the hospital where you worked. Nurses should be recognised more for the caring they do, James :)
Date: 8/30/2009 4:01:00 AM
Dear James,..I'm sorry ! The day will come when Jehovah will wipe out every tear from our eyes ! God bless you friend ! james
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Date: 6/1/2009 3:06:00 PM
I totally feel and relate to the pain in this write. We always have reminders of what could have been...Raul
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Date: 5/25/2009 6:27:00 PM
This is sad. I had four brothers and when one was badly wounded in Nam, we waited in fear. I'm lucky. At 62, I still have them all. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 5/25/2009 3:16:00 PM
Wow! The tragedy is portrayed in a personal and vivid way--sure to connect with readers. Life is never the same after an event like this. The language seems fitting as this enfolds through the eyes of a seven-year-old. Well done! Thank you for all the kind comments your left on my poetry today. I am so grateful. Karen
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Date: 4/29/2009 11:26:00 AM
James, I love this write but it made my eyes misty. Tragedy. Ernilando
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Date: 4/26/2009 10:28:00 AM
Wow...... This is an amazing write... Im so fortunate... This also reminds me of someone in Dec on Christmas who passed away in a car accident.... He was 18 years old.. I love this write... -Elizabeth Lindsey
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Date: 4/25/2009 4:58:00 AM
I'm crying. Life is so hard sometimes. This is well written. It took me to tears and reminded me of a childhood neighbor that was killed in a car accident. It's nice to have you on this site. Always, Dane.
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