Two Apples

Two apples left the tree as noon day sun watched on. from blue sky above. Written 5-23-11

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2011 11:34:00 PM

I think this one was gorgeous, James. One of my very favorites in the entire contest. Congrats on the winners' circle.

James Foulk
Date: 5/30/2011 9:03:00 AM

thank you on your comment.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/29/2011 12:02:00 AM

sensational write, james! best cheers! :) huggs, nette

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/28/2011 8:54:00 PM

Congrats on your win..This is celver. BG

James Foulk
Date: 5/29/2011 9:55:00 AM

thank you but I didn't win, I just got Honorable Mention, which I am very happy with that.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/28/2011 8:51:00 PM

Congrats James on your HM in Carol's contest.. another beauty luv.. enjoy...

James Foulk
Date: 5/29/2011 9:58:00 AM

well thank you you Linda.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 5/28/2011 12:43:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest with this intriguing haiku...

James Foulk
Date: 5/29/2011 10:32:00 AM

thank you, but it sounds like you won, and you deserved to win, ccongrats. I did get honorable mention, which i am happy with that.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/28/2011 11:33:00 AM

Congrats James on your win.....

James Foulk
Date: 5/29/2011 10:41:00 AM

thank you but i didn't win, i did get an honorable mention, but thank you anyway, i was happy to get that.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2011 11:09:00 AM

Great write. Many congratulations on your win, James : )

James Foulk
Date: 5/29/2011 10:46:00 AM

thank you Jack but I didn't win, i got the Honorable mention which i am happy with.

John Freeman

Date: 5/28/2011 6:59:00 AM

James, Congratulations on your success in Carol's Contest. Agape, Moses

James Foulk
Date: 5/28/2011 9:04:00 AM

Well thank you John

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/28/2011 6:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest James. I thank you so much for supporting my contest. Love, Carol

James Foulk
Date: 5/28/2011 9:09:00 AM

thank you Carol, it was fun.

Jack Horne

Date: 5/25/2011 7:23:00 AM

Such vivid imagery, James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2011 8:57:00 AM

vivid picture with your fantastic words James.. good luck in the contest.. apples have many functions ..this one is super fun to view luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/24/2011 7:16:00 AM

Hi James. You're set to go in the contest and I returned your Soup mail explaining the answer to your question. Love, Carolyn

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/24/2011 4:01:00 AM

Looks as tho CArolyn is mentoring u on this one, James...that stirs my heart! First of all, I like how the 2 apples left the tree...sounds like 2 chickens escaping the roost..the other thing that I find enjoyable is that the sun is a polite observer of these events....If you are still polishing this, I will return to it soon. Have a great day...if u ever find anything wrong with my spelling or form I would love it if u would let me know too. Bless YOu, friend! Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/23/2011 3:47:00 PM

Soup mail returned, James. There are two other alternatives that might help. Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2011 10:41:00 AM

Good one..Very creative ...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..If this is for the contest, good luck..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2011 9:06:00 PM

James. I LOVE this. If this is for the contest, Wasn't this to be a senryu? If so, just tweak it a bit to make it into one, but maybe you are ok. If I don't return here, it means you DO need to change to a three line poem. Again, I want to say, I really enjoyed this little picture you created!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/22/2011 12:01:00 PM

Just as birds leave the nest and children leave home... Beautiful entry for Carol's contest, James! Thanks for sharing it with us. Love, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 5/22/2011 7:35:00 PM

James, I hope you saw my Soup mail. Have a nice evening.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/20/2011 9:07:00 PM

it's like it's own little drama going on here James. A cute one, james. A tiny happening watched by the universe. Thank you for your great comments on "Essence of cool." Glad you enjoyed. I appreciate it.

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/20/2011 4:47:00 PM

Very deep write my friend. R.M.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/20/2011 1:45:00 PM

Lovely write on apple deep in meaning, James

Constance La France

Date: 5/20/2011 12:41:00 PM

lovely, James, best of luck