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Two Angels

A story's worth a thousand words,
but this one's worth even more.
It's about 2 angels I know and love,
like 2 love birds taking on off to soar.
They changed me when I needed a change,
and taught me just how to talk.
They fed me when I had to eat,
and taught me each step that I walk.
When I learned all these things, 
and taught the things I now know,
I can see how years can fly by fast
so I treasure each one for they move not slow.
I'm proud to announce how these 2 angels
have made me happy and glad,
to let them know that they're the ones
who I'll forever call my Mom and Dad.

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  1. Date: 7/20/2012 2:10:00 AM
    This was a good tribute and a well written sentiment. However, speaking as a rhyming poet, I often hear things different than what I read. I would like to send my version to you through soup mail. I hope you like it. Rockman :-)

    Pritts Avatar Rockman Pritts
    Date: 7/20/2012 2:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Is your soup mail option off?