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Twister

Tumultuous funnel spins, a whirling dervish spitting out destruction. 12/5/15 For Silent One's One-liners II contest

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/14/2016 11:05:00 AM

#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Kim Merryman
Date: 1/26/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, Funom!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2015 3:44:00 PM

Kim, I am going in circles looking for something to comment on for you!! Anyway, thanks for seeing my poem today! Hope to see some more new work from you soon.

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/15/2015 10:02:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. I've been busy crocheting ponchos for my granddaughters for Christmas and trying to keep up with contests. Having trouble coming up with anything for the contests, but I'm trying.

Tammy Reams

Date: 12/9/2015 5:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/14/2015 1:16:00 PM

Thank you, Tammy!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/9/2015 8:56:00 AM

Reads like a nasty tornado to me...and a deserving winner!! Congratulations, Kim:) ~ All the best // paul

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/14/2015 1:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Paul!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/7/2015 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on the placement of the contest Kim.

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/14/2015 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Nayda!

Michael Tor

Date: 12/7/2015 4:18:00 AM

Great write power packed and true Kim,

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/14/2015 1:14:00 PM

Thank you, Michael!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/7/2015 12:29:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write Kim!

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/14/2015 1:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Upma!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/6/2015 8:49:00 PM

Very colorful use of personification! Congrats on your win. Janice

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/14/2015 1:13:00 PM

Thank you, Janice! Appreciate your comment!

Len Gasun

Date: 12/6/2015 8:00:00 PM

Wow! This is so wonderful! Many warm congrats on your win my dear friend, Kim! Hugs and cheers! <3 Leonora

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 8:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Leonora!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 6:26:00 PM

awesome, Kim. Congrats on the win

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:55:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

James Inman

Date: 12/6/2015 6:13:00 PM

Wonderful imagery.

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:54:00 PM

Thank you, James!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/6/2015 3:05:00 PM

WoW! Kim, you did an amazing wind write. You had good imagery in this one-liner! Congratulations on your winning write it was well deserved:-) Alexis 7

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Alexis!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/6/2015 2:41:00 PM

Lots of imagery in your one-liner, Kim! Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:53:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra!

Lin Lane

Date: 12/6/2015 2:27:00 PM

Very nice, Kim..well done!

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:52:00 PM

Thank you, Lin!

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 2:18:00 PM

Kim, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:51:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 2:15:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:51:00 PM

Thanks, Jan!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 2:11:00 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, Kim !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:50:00 PM

Thanks, Anne-Lise!

Samiha Zubair

Date: 12/6/2015 1:06:00 PM

A beautiful write for the contest

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:48:00 PM

Thank you, Samiha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/5/2015 1:51:00 PM

Good one..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..I am sure that being in a tornado of any size would be terrifying..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:47:00 PM

Thank you, Sara! I've never been in a tornado but I live in an area that gets them.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2015 11:19:00 AM

- A good one, Kim - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:45:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 10:27:00 AM

Very vivid description in so few words - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman
Date: 12/6/2015 7:45:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!