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Twisted Minds

TWISTED MINDS Life is like a puzzle, those who think they know everything, belives that everything should be within a frame, if you are not within this frame, you have a twisted mind. Who gives others the right to judge you, whether within or outside the frame. First, one must look at the cover of the puzzle, some are studying it for a long time, others not at all. You squirms puzzle pieces, some use longer time than others, ranging from hours to years. Some put the puzzle upside down. Are you twisted minded for that. Who has the twisted mind in the end? Entered JOE FLACH's contest TWISTED MINDS 18/02/2012

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Date: 11/10/2012 1:22:00 PM
It is usually the parts of ourselves that we are unhappy with that we notice in others. Good poem, great topic of disscusion.
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Date: 8/30/2012 2:56:00 AM
Yes! More tolerance is needed in the world... Nice poem... Terry
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Date: 4/17/2012 11:56:00 AM
Wow,very strong message expressed,wonderful job Laila~thank you for reading some of my work,very apprieciated.Have a inspiring day love~
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 4/20/2012 5:00:00 AM
Thank you for visiting my poem and for your comment, appreciate it! oxox Laila
Date: 2/23/2012 12:06:00 PM
wooo, a real dazzling puzzle, laila... i like how you ended this...best of winnng luck.. :) huggs!
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/23/2012 12:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Nette, both for reading and wishing my the best of luck! oxoxo love Laila
Date: 2/18/2012 4:01:00 PM
Very well done Laila, good luck in contest - I x-x-x-x my fingers for you!!!! UHU!!mom
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/18/2012 4:37:00 PM
Thank you for reading mom, appreciate it a lot! Thank for wish me good luck in the contest! oxoxo love you! UHU Laila
Date: 2/18/2012 3:54:00 PM
Excellent words and good flow. Enjoyed reading it!
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Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 2/18/2012 4:38:00 PM
Thank you for reading and for all the nice words about my poem! oxoxo love Laila

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