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Deceitful seasons breed perfidy Waves form the fantasy of the starry beam The heart of crimson is bleeding Reflection is a calm shade of blue Blustery winds in the four seasons. Your lights feature an ominous vibe the shine of crimson, as pools of blood It is fully murky throughout the street I shiver as rain pours into the rills on my body Your farewell echoes in the darkness Daggering through the heart Without you, who would I be? Heaven's purple shade shows a glint of silver moonlight dazzles a modest dwelling And I will join you in gazing at the sky The moon attempted to convey this skyward-looking but windowless as blind as they wanted to peer into my chest barrenness and broken fantasy.
Written: November 18, 2022

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Date: 11/20/2022 12:11:00 PM
Super vivid write Lasaad. Your imagery is breathtaking! laf
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Date: 11/19/2022 7:40:00 AM
Very creative write Lasaad, you have a wonderful imagination. Tom
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Date: 11/19/2022 6:59:00 AM
Fiction or not your imagery flies on wings of splendid imagination. Well done my friend.
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Date: 11/19/2022 4:52:00 AM
Poems that are pure fantasy you excel at my friend. your vivid imagination runs riot through your mind and the result, brilliant poetry. Lasaad, very well penned, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/19/2022 4:02:00 AM
Whoa!! Reads like a murder has taken place. Creative fantasy you have created in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 11/18/2022 10:53:00 PM
This is great fantasy.
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