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Twisted Fate

Take your knife Carne con sangre On sale here Cut me up Slice me dice me Taste my sour blood Savor the flavor Revenge is on sale Bitter and sweet all for you Bile flows through me Thinking of your hate You may have butchered me Slaughtered to rot at high time noon I have a revelation for you I love gardens and flowers I now am one with them As I feed them, and bring beauty To those who quench the thirst of love I kiss the sun and laugh at you hahahahahaha

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Lena Emp

Date: 5/26/2014 6:09:00 AM

Because of the bitter things that happen, people sometimes go for revenge. This is so dark and express your feelings so deeply. Hope, better things come.

Gina Montalbo

Date: 5/16/2014 11:12:00 PM

Very cool... I sometimes feel that way

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 10:54:00 PM

As long as you not holding a knife!!!!! LOL cheers!

Saba Khan

Date: 5/12/2014 12:07:00 AM

HA HA HA :D very well (Y)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/23/2014 10:53:00 PM

Thank you Saba!!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/4/2014 1:55:00 PM

Why at high time noon you chose... What symbolism you got there.. :) nice nice one:),olive eloi

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 4:59:00 PM

You caught me, I have no idea, other than it just sounded poetic and BEAUTIFUL. :)

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/3/2014 4:45:00 PM

Hello Arthur, WOW! This was powerful. What expressed imagery. This poem had my attention from start to finish. Thank you very much for sharing this with us here. Peace, Deborah

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 5:00:00 PM

Thanks so much for your kind words!!

Cherl Dunn

Date: 5/3/2014 12:39:00 PM

This reminds me of a poem written by one who was a sacrifice for some ritual maybe because of the type of poetry i've been working on lately but if someone from the past could express himself or herself in words this would fit perfectly great job. cheri thank you for your comment also.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2014 5:01:00 PM

And thank you too!!!! Much appreciated!!

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/2/2014 11:22:00 PM

A good fate.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/2/2014 11:36:00 PM

Thank you Muhamma