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Twins of Gemini

B Beginning my life's journey O On a long road of discovery R Reaching for the stars N Needing to know...but will I ever? U Underestimating the universe N Now finds me under it's power D Deep within the heart, a longing E Eclipsing the moon R Reflected in the eyes of the sky G Gazing with curiosity through cloudy windows E Each pane stares back at me, my twin... M My mirror image , her look of wonder I I search her face to see if she has the answers N No secrets revealed,.. we must both continue to seek...and like a moth... I I flutter, as does she, against the glass, to reach the light Acrostic Contest

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Date: 8/25/2014 9:12:00 AM
brilliant acrostic many congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/25/2014 1:06:00 AM
Gemini people are blessed by the planet Saturn, congrats on the win. carrie
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Date: 8/24/2014 1:49:00 PM
A great win and truly a very fine acrostic! Congrats my friend!!
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:33:00 AM
super acrostic Carrie congrats on fine win hugs
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:12:00 AM
- Hey Carrie, congratulations on your first place in the contest: Zodiac Sign, sponsored by: Leonora Galinta - A very well written poem! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:49:00 AM
Carrie, congratulations on a TOP of the class win! Excellent write for a well-deserved placement! Pandita
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Date: 8/24/2014 9:43:00 AM
A very beautiful poem on zodiac sign you’ve penned my dear poet friend,Carrie! I enjoyed thoroughly the read. Congratulations on your great win! So much thanks as well for your loving support. Biggest hugs and cheers! Love lots always, Leonora
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Date: 9/18/2010 7:47:00 PM
Ahhh, I smell u'r pain there sister!
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Date: 5/26/2010 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on your success in Jared Picket’s acrostic contest with this Gemini poem. Your creativity is glowing! Smiles, Dane Ann.
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Date: 5/25/2010 10:45:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win with this fine poetry in Jared's contest >> James
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Date: 5/20/2010 5:16:00 PM
Nicely done. Is the poet the twin or the alter ego? The sign I was born under...Maternity Ward. lol Congrats on your win. Joe
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Date: 5/20/2010 1:54:00 PM
I really like the way you did that last stanza, Carrie. SO you are Gemini? Luv, Andrea ps. A big congrats!!
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Date: 5/20/2010 10:50:00 AM
Congrats Carrie ..on your winning poem in Jared's contest... and if u are a Gemini..say hi to another Gemini ..ME... enjoyed this write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/20/2010 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/20/2010 9:39:00 AM
This is beautiful and great poetry as well as an acrostic. Copngratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/17/2009 2:13:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on placing first place in the contest.
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Date: 5/16/2009 2:14:00 PM
Carrie, congrats with you success in the contest, you are ablaze with your pen...Raul
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Date: 5/14/2009 9:53:00 AM
Gongratulations on your win in Danielle's contest. Your poem is flawless and beautiful. Love, Dane
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:06:00 AM
Oh gosh Carrie this is great. The last third and forth line are killer awesome. Woo Whooo
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Date: 5/13/2009 9:32:00 PM
Congratulations on winning first place a marvelous write with such insight of twins of Gemini, I knew there had to be two sides of you though they are so equally sweet and friendly,I witness these in all the comments you have posted on my poetry as well as others,,and Thank you again for all your comments you leave upon my words,,,blessings..Cecil
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Date: 5/8/2009 12:28:00 AM
Congrats on your success with this poem Carrie Rgds Brian
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Date: 5/7/2009 5:19:00 PM
congrad's on your 1st place win!!! Light & Love
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Date: 5/7/2009 3:49:00 PM
Carrie Congratulations on your first place win! Laura :)
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Date: 5/7/2009 3:01:00 PM
Dear Carrie,Congratulations on YOUR Win in Danielle White's Contest Excellent Acrostic well deserved 1st Place ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/7/2009 1:24:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! I knew it!!! You deserve this awesome First Place win! Way to go CARRIE GAL!!! Love & hugs, Shar XOXOXOXOXOXO
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