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Twins In Twin Swings Swing

twins in twin swings swing baby pink toes waving bye Dad snores on the bench

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Date: 4/29/2010 4:59:00 PM
Hey! I think that last line described me! That first line almost had me! This was a wonderful write on what is a peaceful thing. you make it sound so relaxing, not a care in the world. Terrific write.
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Date: 4/21/2010 4:23:00 PM
AWESOME senryu, Deb. soupmail.
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Date: 4/21/2010 2:11:00 PM
Like it ,,reminda me of my childhood not the dad part the twins. p.d.
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