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Twine and One

...twine and one... Whilst the sky is jet darkly the stars are brilliantly diamonds sparkling capturing the hearts of the night's lovers sitting by the water with lips lock uncaring to the naked eyes of the night Who, what, and wherever - doesn't matter to them at this hour of amorous They are two lovers to be loved tonight Alive with a fever Hungry for one another Tonight is theirs alone ... to twine and one... Paralyzing to the world from the heat of passion spreading rapidly thru thin veins Yearning Needing ...to twine and one... Two souls are now become one Undisturbed to the crashing of the waves that's cheering them on Unaware of the soft breeze caressing their naked skins tenderly They are two lovers making sweet passionate love tonight Unshy to the naked eyes of the night Who, what, and wherever - doesn't matter to them at this enchanting night They are content They are complete ... twine and one... Drifting off to sleep and dream Whilst the sky still darkly Under the diamond sparkling stars The now calm water swaying gently The now still breeze asleep soundless Everything is at peace Their world is whole for now... Smile! Akkina R Downing 11-26-11

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Date: 8/6/2017 9:01:00 AM
What a beautifully written romantic poem the opening three lines are stunningly captivating. As for the rest such passion such incredibly deep emotion magnificent Kina absolutely magnificent.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 8/6/2017 5:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Ed, your comments are always kind and sweet :)
Date: 12/23/2016 7:17:00 PM
Wonderful poetry, Akkina. The waves and then the calm, just like making love. Great imagery in your descriptive poem:)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/23/2016 7:39:00 PM
Many many thanks from my heart to yours :)
Date: 11/28/2016 4:46:00 PM
I like how it starts slow and builds to a passion,reminds me of Ravels Bolero.nicely done..
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Akkina Downing
Date: 11/28/2016 5:45:00 PM
Hehe... Thank you Keith :)
Date: 11/28/2016 12:00:00 AM
A beautiful romantic poem painting a vibrant picture of true love. Excellently written.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 11/28/2016 5:27:00 AM
Many thanks, christy
Date: 11/27/2016 8:13:00 AM
oh how passionate and romantic Akkina I especially love the line of the crashing waves cheering them on - how lovely an image you create:-) hugs jan xx
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Akkina Downing
Date: 11/27/2016 8:26:00 AM
Thank you Jan, I appreciate your comment very much :)

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