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Twin Palms

Twin Palms In a pensive mood I walked downhill Reflecting on the disappearing years Wondering how many more autumns left To enjoy the golden sun on his way home Down the flaming hill-side. I spread out my palm to catch The messages of love sent By my luminous-amorous lover. My palm gilded as his light passed through it The lines on my palm stood out Like roads now deserted For only a few loved travellers still enjoying The scenic and peaceful landscape. I clasped my fist to hold his fading golden light Treasuring it in my kingdom Of simple rustic joys. I travelled down my long road Remembering all the hands Warm enough to hold mine To lead me to reach my destiny. The pine breeze softly whispered 'Open both your palms before your face Permit his alpenglow through it to burnish your face'. Smilingly I opened the tightened fist to free The twinkling golden spark I was holding onto a moment ago And joined the other like twin palms spread out. My romantic golden lover sailed down his gondola His voice musically echoing in the valley 'With my light of love burning in your heart Your hands have been warmed enough For anyone to hold for a lifetime of joy'. Balveen Cheema November18, 2014 Contest:Any Poem Written This Week Sponsor: Skat A

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Date: 12/27/2015 6:52:00 AM
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/7/2015 6:18:00 AM
Thanks Eve!
Date: 12/4/2015 11:17:00 PM
Wonderful poem and win Balveen ... big congrats!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 2:56:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 12/4/2015 10:14:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/5/2015 2:59:00 AM
Thanks Skat! Now, let's work on your next collaboration! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/18/2015 10:08:00 AM
Great imagery!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 10:13:00 AM
Richard, i'm replying to one and the messages are going haywire! Thanks
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/18/2015 10:10:00 AM
Thanks for the correction,Silent one! And apologies I was replying to Marugu when your message came.

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