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Twilight's Fading Light

Twilight’s fading light silently morphs into A cobalt sky, with diamonds sprinkled Twinkling, and the sweet scent of blooming Jasmine lingers heady in the air. Earth’s dark curtain coaxes tiny creatures To sing their songs and move along To gather food and feed their young Without the heat of daytime’s sun. Moonbeams with their gentle glow Illuminate their little paths as friendly trees Cast darkened shadows on the garden wall. Dew drops form on blades of grass And cover all in frosty white until the dawn Draws down the diamonds from the sky to To spread across the meadow’s peaceful rising. *For Laura Mckenzie’s “Beyond Nightfall” Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/4/2010 9:38:00 PM
gosh, connie, it's time for you to get at least two more poems up pronto. I feel like I owe you at least three responses tonight for all your sweet comments. I should change He to she for my chicken little poem! So glad you liked it. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/3/2010 2:19:00 PM
Wow ...now that's what I call a nightfall...enjoyed..especially the sweet scent of blooming Jasmine...Marty
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Date: 3/3/2010 4:14:00 AM
very beautiful poem, enjoyed reading it, today
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:56:00 PM
Hey, connie, I don't think I see other poems here that I haven't read already. Thanks so much for reading three of mine tonight. I am so bad, here I am missing american Idol too. I am just now finally going to post my chicken poems. I need your help deciding between them! Glad you liked Yeti. haha. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:46:00 AM
I'm also including this in my list, Connie--the title alone is beautiful, and your magnificent poem supports i t all throughout--a dream of a poem, Connie, just beautiful!
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Date: 2/28/2010 11:51:00 PM
Aha, here it is, your most awesome poem that is sure to get into the winner's circle. Crossing my fingers for ya. And this goes to favs!
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:36:00 PM
Oh my God, you really can write, can't you.....................I am blown away!
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Date: 2/28/2010 8:19:00 PM
A very beautiful nightsky you describe here in this well written poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/28/2010 1:46:00 PM
Excellent, beautiful poem and entry for Laura's "Beyond Nightfall" Contest, Connie! I am sure this is a winner, hands down! Peace, love, Audry
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Date: 2/28/2010 12:24:00 PM
Very nice...I submitted to this contest too, and I think also found the word "curtain" as nice expression... I heard through the soupvice that you are from hawaii. If so, which island? I live on Oahu...
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Date: 2/28/2010 10:06:00 AM
So much serenity in this beautiful description of nightfall, Connie. So many awesome lines, especially "Jasmine lingers heady in the air." That powerful scent does seem to fill our heads, doesn't it? Good luck in the contest! Love, carolyn
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Date: 2/28/2010 9:57:00 AM
tittle caught my attention lol... i'm a twilight fanatic... what teenager isn't... this was a very beautiful poem by the way i liked the descriptions in it... Royal T.
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