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Twilight Meets Dawn

Soft fire is his eyes fondling my soul without words ... twilight’s balm drips down Our warm pulses meet in thrills of hushed surrender... baptizing fresh dawn © . …….. .

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/22/2012 6:06:00 PM

Steamy one gal! Congrad's Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2012 8:14:00 PM

wozer. you scored again with this GEM. congrats.

Mike Dailey

Date: 3/20/2012 4:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I am not a fan of this form but your poems are begenning to turn me around on them. Mike

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/20/2012 1:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win.Sara

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/20/2012 8:40:00 AM

mind blowing Nette........congrats on the top placement..........~sashi

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/19/2012 3:25:00 PM

Congrats on your awesome win! Beautiful imagery, Nette. Blessings, Rhonda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 12:36:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "Ten For" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/19/2012 12:26:00 PM

very beautiful. Congratulations.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/19/2012 7:48:00 AM

beautiful images in this poem. Congratulations.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/19/2012 3:18:00 AM

Thrilled to see your name at the top of the list in this contest, Nette. Congrats on a sensual dreamy write. Love, Gwendolen

Deborah Burch

Date: 3/19/2012 2:42:00 AM

Congratulations, Nette, on your 1st place win in Brian's Contest!!!!! Well done! Beautiful piece!!!Big Hugggss~Deb~

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/31/2012 7:30:00 AM

Congrats nette, this is sooo lovely. BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 8:56:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on a super first place win.. oh yes.. sweets..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2012 4:07:00 PM

This SO deserves first place. I gotta fave it too. Congratulations, Nette.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/30/2012 2:28:00 PM

Of course [our] is 1 syllable ;) congrad's on your win [aim for my throat with that white light nette] Light & Love

Jon Arno

Date: 1/30/2012 2:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning write :) Jon

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2012 11:39:00 AM

Very nice, Nette. Congratulations on your first-place win in Francine's contest! Love, carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/30/2012 11:35:00 AM

Ahhhhhhhhhh......lovely and romantic! Congrats !!!

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/30/2012 11:32:00 AM

Depth of love of heart wonderfully depicted with sweet words, loved and enjoyed. Congrats you on your win. Loved, bl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 11:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement in Francine's contest . Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/30/2012 11:15:00 AM

congrats on your first place win nette, it was wonderful and had the third line cut which most did not

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2012 8:13:00 PM

Nette, I would think anyone would realize our only has one syllable. Same as the word Hour. Some of the dipthong syllables are hard for people to realize they are just one long sound! This is really beautiful. I am sure she will love it.

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/28/2012 11:15:00 AM

What a fantastic write Nette! From the awesome twilight to the amazing dawn brings such romance to any couple! I enjoyed the poem immensely, so very well done! Great Work!!

Tim B

Date: 1/28/2012 9:44:00 AM

A passionate write, a fiery and breathing poem. Good luck in the contest, I am sure a winner.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2012 9:44:00 AM

well a breathtaking set of lines for this romantic contest Nette luv.. much success and such vibrant imagery too..luv..