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Twilight Ascends

Twilight ascends as dusk arrives, the moonlit stars gather and thrive- Sweet day dreams have come to a close, while midnight softness does expose- The constellations have survived. From mother nature dark derives, beautiful shadows come alive- Crepuscule dimness does repose… -twilight ascends The Lord above sure did contrive, a masterpiece, love does revive- A mystery nobody knows, eventide, tranquil as it glows- Morning sun starts to rise by five, into daybreak it gently flows… -twilight ascends Date Written: September 22, 2016

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Date: 9/27/2016 2:45:00 PM
Congrats Laura well-written Twilight x
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Date: 9/26/2016 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your # 1 win! I can't believe the word, crepuscule, means twilight. ;-)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2016 1:43:00 PM
thanks Tom :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on your first place placement in the contest! I have one nit though: stars are not "moonlit"; maybe "moonlit stars" ->"moon and stars"(?)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/26/2016 1:43:00 PM
thanks Jerome, I like it the way it is :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 3:59:00 PM
A 7 for this beautiful winning poem, Luloo! Janice
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 4:20:00 PM
thank you Janice :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 3:06:00 PM
Very beautiful LuLoo Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 4:19:00 PM
thank you Jan :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 7:52:00 AM
This is excellent, Laura:) loved it absolutely:) congratulations on top spot:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:26:00 AM
thank you lovely Jo :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 6:15:00 AM
Love it, luloo! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:25:00 AM
thank you sweet Fran :)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 4:31:00 AM
AMAZING!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:25:00 AM
thank you sweet Jean:)-luloo
Date: 9/25/2016 3:12:00 AM
Beautiful rondeau, luloo. Congratulations on your win! Agnes
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:25:00 AM
thank you sweet Agnes :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 10:28:00 PM
WOW! Dear Laura, Wonderful Rondeau on Twilight,there is tranquillity and there is sunrise in your poem..congrats on your great win!!!..........love, Anu:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:24:00 AM
thank you sweet Anulaxmi :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 9:46:00 PM
You did a great job in this contest. Congratulations
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:24:00 AM
thank you lovely Joyce :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 8:20:00 PM
Wonderful write, congratulations on your win....:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:23:00 AM
thank you sweet Eve :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place write, Laura. You are so talented. I really love the last stanza. A7
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/25/2016 11:23:00 AM
thank you DT :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 5:02:00 PM
You have done an excellent job with the rondeau form which is a challenge. Lovely repose in this piece. Congratulations on your win, luloo.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2016 5:04:00 PM
thank you sweet Janis :)-luloo
Date: 9/24/2016 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on the first placement of the contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2016 3:29:00 PM
oh Nayda, I am so honored you like it. Thank you so very much lovely lady :)-luloo
Date: 9/22/2016 6:42:00 PM
Beautiful write Laura...and a beautiful picture too...
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2016 2:58:00 PM
many thanks dear Joseph :)-luloo
Date: 9/22/2016 3:04:00 PM
Beautifully written with intense expression, Laura Loo! Such fine rhythm in your Rondeau poem :) Good luck in the contest, enjoyed d:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2016 2:58:00 PM
thank you lovely Laura :)-luloo
Date: 9/22/2016 2:21:00 PM
Laura I was caught up in your poem I really enjoyed reading your poem.I could see the twilight as I was reading your poem. Well done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2016 2:57:00 PM
thank you sweet Darlene :)-luloo
Date: 9/22/2016 1:45:00 PM
Beautifully written piece.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/24/2016 2:57:00 PM
thank you sweet Carol :)-luloo
Date: 9/22/2016 9:03:00 AM
You've chosen such expressive words in your twilight poem, Luloo. Well done.
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/22/2016 9:09:00 AM
thank you Lin :)-luloo

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