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Twilight

Twilight is the time of day's dying, when breezes have stopped all their sighing. The sun's gone to bed, the moon's up instead, invading my room with its spying. 9/21/16

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Date: 9/25/2016 11:31:00 AM
Terry-very cute limerick :) congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2016 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Laura. I will write a limerick at the drop of a hat!
Date: 9/25/2016 3:22:00 AM
Congrats on your placement, Terry.
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 9/24/2016 7:43:00 PM
I love this little poem. Very fun and smart, Terry. Congratulations on your placement.
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thanks very much.
Date: 9/24/2016 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations Terry on the placement of the contest.
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2016 10:35:00 AM
Thanks. Did not expect it. Very new to the site.
Date: 9/22/2016 8:17:00 AM
Twilight's the time between sunshine and dark, when joyous birdsong ascends from the park, the time when my cat lies out on the ledge, to bathe in the music that comes from the hedge, each melody brings sweet life to his heart.
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/25/2016 10:36:00 AM
Thanks. Glad that you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/21/2016 7:04:00 PM
I like your limerick it is so cute.It made me smile. Way to go!!! I enjoyed your limerick.
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Terry Hoffman
Date: 9/21/2016 7:11:00 PM
Thanks so much. I have been experimenting, writing limericks on more serious subjects. I find it is a lot of fun.

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