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Twilight

twilight fondles eyes lifting her silhouette high against lucid clouds-- flesh undressed beneath torn trees drowning in pools of farewell Tanka Written With A Decent Pivot For Chris D. Aechtner

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Date: 4/20/2014 5:50:00 AM
Congrats on the win here Gabby, this speaks to me of the inadaquacy of people aimdst the endlessness and at times almost overpowening presence of the temporal world..
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Date: 4/16/2014 6:05:00 PM
HI GABBY, Congratulations, enjoyed stopping by. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/16/2014 1:50:00 PM
You still surprise me with your sweet and tender writing. Great job my friend! congrats on your win
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Date: 4/15/2014 6:30:00 PM
wow, amazing imagery!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/15/2014 2:57:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive winning work..Way to go with this one..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 4/14/2014 12:49:00 PM
Nice Gabby... Congratulations on your win. Verlena
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Date: 4/8/2014 8:17:00 AM
The best thoughts are within this poem Gabby!
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