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Below is the poem entitled twilight which was written by poet J B. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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exploring mind and soul
hands travel slowly a path they know
love lingers in twilight

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  1. Date: 1/20/2011 12:04:00 PM
    You have kung fued the Haiku formula. But a very well-written, substantive verse! Intersting that you write about love making from a female perspective. You began by exploring the metaphysical qualities of the mind and soul in the first verse. In the second verse, you caress the physical parts of your lover. You are a good boy. Your women have trained you well. Enjoyed your thoughts on love making.

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 7:26:00 AM
    Vey Nicely Written...Not sure about the syllable count....Christine

  1. Date: 1/20/2011 5:56:00 AM
    Worth bending the haiku rules for, very sensual poem. well done.