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Twilight 1

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Twilight 1

TWILIGHT


Hide and seek  sun;
Yet,  the one for
A  fun  chit- chat.

Grey lies the sea;
As  a  plea  for
A  free discourse.

Computer  nerd,
For once,  heard the
Lone  bird  twitter.



S.Jagathsimhan Nair
12 april 2012
For Nette’s Twilight contest

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  1. Date: 4/19/2012 4:45:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 4/19/2012 5:35:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on yor placement. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 7:34:00 AM
    congrats on your win...Love the last one. BG

  1. Date: 4/18/2012 5:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win Jag xx

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:01:00 PM
    The last stanza receives a standing ovation, Jag! How strong! Hope u got my mail..Gwendolen

  1. Date: 4/15/2012 8:23:00 AM
    very unique!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 6:39:00 AM
    hahaha, I LOVE that last part. Computer nerd! In my case. Soup nerd that just happens to be here with insomnia today!!

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 2:04:00 AM
    Nice poem. I enjoyed and love it. Good luck and best wishes.

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 7:03:00 AM
    This is good Jag, hope for a win for you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/12/2012 6:48:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Jag.. Charma