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Twilight 1

TWILIGHT Hide and seek sun; Yet, the one for A fun chit- chat. Grey lies the sea; As a plea for A free discourse. Computer nerd, For once, heard the Lone bird twitter. S.Jagathsimhan Nair 12 april 2012 For Nette’s Twilight contest

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Date: 4/19/2012 4:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/19/2012 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Jag. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2012 11:43:00 AM
Congratulations on yor placement. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/18/2012 7:34:00 AM
congrats on your win...Love the last one. BG
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Date: 4/18/2012 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jag xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 12:01:00 PM
The last stanza receives a standing ovation, Jag! How strong! Hope u got my mail..Gwendolen
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Date: 4/15/2012 8:23:00 AM
very unique!! Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:39:00 AM
hahaha, I LOVE that last part. Computer nerd! In my case. Soup nerd that just happens to be here with insomnia today!!
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Date: 4/13/2012 2:04:00 AM
Nice poem. I enjoyed and love it. Good luck and best wishes.
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Date: 4/12/2012 7:03:00 AM
This is good Jag, hope for a win for you in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:48:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this afternoon Jag.. Charma
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