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Twenty-Four Black Roses

Deserted Desolate Destitute Empty Homeless Isolated Lonesome Reclusive Solitary Abandoned Alone Apart By oneself Companionless Estranged Forsaken Godforsaken Left Lone Outcast Rejected Renounced Secluded Sinking Twenty-four black roses Hanging around my neck Twenty-four hangmen Collecting on loves debt

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Robert Lindley

Date: 9/25/2014 9:18:00 AM

I HOPE THIS WRITE WAS NOT HOW YOU ARE FEELING NOW MY FRIEND.. I hope it was poetic expression and imagination given..

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:49:00 PM

We all have good days and bad days, all is good, thanks!

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/25/2014 9:16:00 AM

A great message in this deep write my friend. We must teach our kids to rise after they fall. To cut the chains that entrap. To fight every day the evil that looms so large. To stand tall, spit in the eye of evil and give to others for that is the true expression of love.. Fantastic creative write a super solid 7 I give it. Wish there was a 10 to give..

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:49:00 PM

Thanks Robert!!! Much appreciated

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/25/2014 4:59:00 AM

Inspirational and inspiring with its ingenious expression, dear Arthur! Seven for originality and content!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:48:00 PM

Thank you Demetrios

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/24/2014 10:55:00 PM

An incredible poem. Unique, original, creative and captivating.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/28/2014 7:48:00 PM

Thanks Maurice, I'd die for nice comments like that!