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I’ve brought you a Mother's Day bouquet tied with a black bow. And amidst twelve red roses, I placed one as white as snow. You gave birth to thirteen souls but one passed on before you. And I recall how that pain nearly tore your heart in two. This sprig of scented kisses is to tell you we're alright. And each red rose is thriving, while the white shares heaven's light. This floral salutation is to honor you today. And tell you that I love you, in my sentimental way. When angels took you from me, I laid roses on your grave. And not knowing what to say, I tried my best to be brave. I miss your smile in my life, now, I no longer feel whole. For it lit up the dark and illuminated my soul. (Quatrain) 5/15/2016

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Date: 11/18/2021 10:15:00 AM
Emile, congratulations. This write reaches out to touch a very deep part of the heart. It is beautifully, and elegantly, written. A lovely tribute.
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Date: 11/18/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thanks, Sam, I very much appreciate your kind comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/12/2018 11:19:00 PM
Amazing imagery and symbolism with the roses.
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Date: 5/23/2016 1:08:00 PM
Wow! This is awesome, awesome and so awesome. This piece is heartfelt and deeper than deep.
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Date: 5/23/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thanks Funom, it is a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2016 10:35:00 AM
Very poignant, Emile. Your poem speaks for all peoples from each and every walk of life. My very best regards as always...And my warmest wishes. :) john
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Date: 5/18/2016 8:49:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 5/16/2016 7:02:00 AM
You always have a way with words that just draws me in. Love the sentiments you expressed that are so personal yet we all can relate. Very emotive yet simple in it's expression. Sometimes subtle simplicity works best. A7
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:55:00 AM
Thanks John, your comments and visits mean so much to me, I truly appreciate them my friend. Emile.
Date: 5/15/2016 4:17:00 PM
Very beautiful Mother's day poem Emile!
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Date: 5/15/2016 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Arthur, I appreciate your comments, both here and on your blog, you are very kind. Emile.

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