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Tweet 9

stuck inside the clock face looking out onto green fields and white cloud punctuated blue skies minute hand rhythmically blocking the view

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/2/2017 8:38:00 PM

This is clever and brilliant Scott! : )

Funom Makama

Date: 5/16/2017 10:09:00 AM

This is brilliant and beautiful. Leaving your pages for a while equates throwing away refined Gold into the pacific. Now I know why my hands itch when away from your pages. Top notch mental exhibition and a powerful seven. Its been a while wonderful friend!

David Smith

Date: 5/2/2017 1:37:00 AM

Something worth pondering. Short but attention grabbing and last line is perfect. Sorry I have not been by more often. Hope you are well. A 6.8 David in NZ

Maria Williams

Date: 4/30/2017 8:08:00 AM

A great tweet Scott.love t.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/18/2017 5:41:00 AM

Hello Scott. May nothing block the view of green fields or blue skies (lol) We see the hand rolling rolling round and round with time. I found this original. Well done

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/7/2017 9:09:00 PM

Tick tock. Just stopping by to say hi, it's been a while , hope you are good my friend. hugs x

Pashang Salehi

Date: 3/26/2017 5:41:00 PM

then I'll dance as the day lights fade.

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/14/2017 9:37:00 PM

Wonderful! Really appreciable. Best Wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/8/2017 7:34:00 AM

- A great ... tweet, Scott - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2017 4:47:00 PM

this is SO COOL, Scott. I love it. By the way, you asked who wants to live forever? I DO! (but only if I am not filled with any horrid disease or aches and pains) I would live endlessly if I were able. Guess I have to settle for reincarnation?