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'twas the Night

‘Twas the night before Christmas and I didn’t care; I had dozens of latkes I had to prepare. The menorah was ready, with candles to light, Waiting there by the window, a wonderful sight. The presents were wrapped and I lined up the dreidels; The soup was a’bubble, with floating knaidels. The applesauce waited to chill in the fridge In a Chanukah bowl. (Yes, I tasted a smidge.) The cookies were baked like my grandmother taught, (So much better than any that anyone bought) Shaped like candles and dreidels and six-sided stars; There were plenty to fill cookie platters and jars. When I suddenly sensed there was something the matter. I raced to the kitchen – the oil was a’splatter! For while I was fixing the festive display, I should have been frying (not quite my forte). The first batch of latkes was burnt to a crisp And smoke filled the kitchen (much more than a wisp), But tying my apron for take number two, I ditched all the burnt ones and knew what to do. I lowered the flame and reheated some oil, Plopping spoonfuls of batter I wouldn’t let spoil. Then I conjured my childhood and Chanukahs past, When I had no idea years would fly by so fast. And I pictured my nana and grandma, as well As my parents, my grandfathers and Aunt Sydelle And my brothers and sister and cousins galore And my uncles and aunts I’ve not mentioned before. While my latkes were frying, so crispy and gold, I remembered how Chanukah used to unfold, When we played with our dreidels and gathered our gelt, In our family’s embrace and the love we all felt. So I cooked the new latkes with patience and care, Knowing that with my kids and my grandkids I’d share All the pent-up emotions I’ve hidden inside With a platter of latkes, now perfectly fried. And to all who will celebrate Chanukah time, I do hope there’s a lesson for you in this rhyme – For the very-best feelings our childhoods instill, Through traditions, our hearts and our bellies will fill. December 7, 2022

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Date: 12/24/2022 6:48:00 AM
Congrats on your win Ilene, Wonderful write, Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/23/2022 7:53:00 PM
"the very-best feelings our childhoods instill, Through traditions, our hearts and our bellies will fill" - Great lesson, indeed! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/13/2022 10:07:00 PM
This is so rich with the sights and smells and family and traditions and memories and generational continuity; all the very best of what the holiday season means... written in that wonderful 'Twas The Night Before lilt. A fave, and a big congrats for your beautiful POTD ~ John
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:53:00 AM
hey john! it's always a pleasure to hear from you! your comment is just the chicken soup i need today!
Date: 12/11/2022 1:36:00 AM
Tardy congratulations on POTD, Ilene. I read this poem and I could have sworn I left a comment… I must have had an episode. Congrats again. Terry
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:52:00 AM
thank for reaching out, terry! i very much appreciate it!
Date: 12/10/2022 4:26:00 AM
This is written SO well, Ilene. "Love it" Congratulations on POTD. Happy Chanuka as well. Charlie
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
much appreciated, charlie! wishing you a happy holiday, too!
Date: 12/9/2022 8:05:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD Ilene….Debx
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
thank you very much, deb!
Date: 12/9/2022 6:50:00 PM
Memories are both precious and priceless. So sweet of you to share these tender moments. Happy Chanukah, Ilene. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
thank you for your kind comment, brandy! happy holidays!
Date: 12/9/2022 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD Ilene! Brought back memories. All you need is knishes and cheese blintzes with sour cream and a Chanukah bush! Robert
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:49:00 AM
ha! as a kid i used to take the tinsel from the neighbor's discarded christmas tree and decorate the bushes in front of my house, much to my mother's dismay...
Date: 12/9/2022 5:31:00 PM
Dear Ilene, your lovely holiday poem is so endearing. Delightful imagery and wonderful rhymes fill the poetic page with warm nostalgia, celebration and love. Congratulations for the worthy and well-deserved honor of POTD! Warmest wishes and Happy Chanukah! ~Susan
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:48:00 AM
thank you for that lovely comment, susan! best wishes to you for a happy holiday as well...
Date: 12/9/2022 3:02:00 PM
Ilene, a wonderfully entertaining poem with a sweet ending, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:48:00 AM
thank you for stopping by, tania!
Date: 12/9/2022 2:19:00 PM
Absolutely inspired poetry, fun and sweet. I love it! Elizabeth
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:47:00 AM
thanks for your kind words, elizabeth!
Date: 12/9/2022 11:49:00 AM
An absolutely delightful read and a perfect choice for POTD, Ilene...and I'm not even Jewish! Are you going to enter this in the "The Night Before.." contest?
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/14/2022 10:47:00 AM
thank you, jim! your support means a lot to me. that contest inspired this poem and yes, i did enter it (even though i rarely enter contests these days)...
Date: 12/9/2022 11:04:00 AM
Such a beautiful Christmas piece ilene, lovely rhyme and flow showing great insightfulness too. Congrats on the POTD, blessings always,Gordon
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:46:00 AM
much appreciated, gordon! have a wonderful holiday!
Date: 12/9/2022 10:38:00 AM
- So many wonderful memories, Ilene - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Date: 12/14/2022 10:46:00 AM
thank you very much, anne-lise!
Date: 12/9/2022 8:43:00 AM
Mazel tov! I love cooking stories, lovely story Ilene, family is everything. I tried making Latkas one Christmas, ha, first time is always a good time, I've made Matzo ball soup as well, why? But tamale's a favorite. All traditional foods. Happy Chanukah! Congratulations on your POTD!
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Date: 12/9/2022 9:16:00 AM
Thank you, Anaya! Those traditional foods really make the holiday special to me. Best wishes for a lovely holiday yourself…
Date: 12/9/2022 7:11:00 AM
Ilene, I thought I might see this one recognized as potd. It's as well written as the classic. Congratulations!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/9/2022 9:15:00 AM
Wow! That compliment makes my heart sing, Jenna! Thank you!
Date: 12/9/2022 5:48:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on your P.O.T.D. I enjoyed this the second time around as much as the first time around.
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Date: 12/9/2022 9:14:00 AM
That is so sweet, Milton! Thank you again!
Date: 12/9/2022 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Ilene! This is a wonderful poem with memories and reminiscences of the celebration! "And I pictured my nana and grandma,.." How beautiful! Love and blessings ~ Mala
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Date: 12/9/2022 9:13:00 AM
Thank you, Mala! I can’t bake my cookies without thinking of my grandma or make my latkes without thoughts of my nana…
Date: 12/9/2022 5:14:00 AM
This is a great poem, Ilene. So worthy of POTD. Mazel tov!
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Date: 12/9/2022 9:12:00 AM
It means a lot to hear from another latke eater, Gershon! Thanks for stopping by again!
Date: 12/9/2022 2:25:00 AM
That's wonderful, Ilene - so glad for your POTD, but mostly for the traditions and happy memories captured in this poem.
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Date: 12/9/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thank you, Jeff! My cookies take hours to make but I send them out to my siblings and Aunt Sydelle (the last one remaining of her generation) every year…
Date: 12/9/2022 2:14:00 AM
Beautiful poem and a fun read. Puts me in the mood for the season. Congratulations on your POTD, Ilene. Enjoy your special day! Bill
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/9/2022 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so much, Bill! I wish you a wonderful holiday as well…
Date: 12/9/2022 1:13:00 AM
Nice one ilene. Congrats on POTD
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/9/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thanks, Terry! Much appreciated!
Date: 12/9/2022 1:03:00 AM
Wonderful potd! Loved
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/9/2022 9:06:00 AM
Thank you for the shout-out, Karen!
Date: 12/9/2022 12:33:00 AM
Back with big congratulations Ilene on this well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/9/2022 9:04:00 AM
It’s always a pleasure to hear from you, Tom! Thank you again!
Date: 12/8/2022 2:58:00 PM
Which year is this about? Is it an older poem?
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 12/8/2022 5:37:00 PM
It’s a new poem, partly fiction but with very accurate reminiscences…
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