'Twas Naught His Night

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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 20

Image: Frankenstein's Mary Shelley by The University of Oxford

With which writer or poet can you relate the most? - Quora

Be there the bight of a November drain turned off tattered ruffles blotted feign a ledged I removed and tender earlobes waif yonder spectral possession probes cracked nut overture eighteenth twelve emptied shells retiring indicative delve drain feign earlobes probes twelve delve the hour, Penchant dragged scrape innard depth souring blindly binds ruse lids breadth spar sun astir, causation its wandering scar bites of frost attend a clouded ring constant errs my inner chambers abide pivotal piques tricked darkening inside depth breadth spar scar abide inside the hour, A vast plague of vulture flights accrues a lowly sill contempt its stay construes awake dreamt feverishly reposed body quake aloof save I some valued nobody unsorted escort disembodied but feats wonder maroon beheld tethering beats accrues construes awake quake feats beats the hour, Therefore I'd wallowed jousting to free of peals of laughter trifle trailing spree feeble villagers thoughtless each share of riddled backside amidst tabled stare and counters gossip whispers consume be their claim graphic God they assume free spree share stare consume assume the hour, Remains of a last supper disrobed hang amidst bunker migrating seasons pang yond trained reflect stories trail facials a negging crowded calls milds a rituals saved I a memoir cloistered singularity paved upon silken weaves a familiarity hang pang facials rituals saved paved the hour, Bewitched canons riddled yon the altar stacking of hymnals liberates Gibraltar of liquefied gift cascading gratification love stain pigments of my imagination hues meld a silencing orchestrate suite enhance the loyal thunder ne'er retreat altar Gibraltar of love suite retreat the hour.

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Tom Woody

Date: 12/4/2023 11:11:00 AM

Thank you for this outstanding effort and for supporting the contest William

Hilo Poet
Date: 12/4/2023 11:26:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. A 1st for me, I do trend...still, like beautiful Shelley to have mused Frankenstein, what's the odds. TC of your beautiful wife, Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 11/21/2023 1:55:00 PM

You have done this so well... combined two very different styles and produced a perfect poem.. a great use of vocabulary and designed it so well..

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/21/2023 10:11:00 PM

A swamp of alliterations, Silent One, fulfills shared visions. Aspects transcribed as a differing quill accommodates. Necessitates even-handedness that consequently succeeds its purpose--hopes I. Your courtesies are overwhelming, my friend. TC and Aloha, William

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/21/2023 12:47:00 PM

Well done, my friend! You have captured the language and the darkness of each poet in rich and eloquent images! Very creative formatting - extremely hard to do but from you it looks easy! This is intricately designed for maximum impact! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/21/2023 10:42:00 PM

I am blessed by your words, Sam. The mirror reflects evenly on the attempt to address the sponsors' intentions. Its delivery was challenging for my interpretations must convey a differing of authors, as well as their styles hence, my intro into the mixology that flavors the poem. Again, you honor me more in every one of your commentaries, ko'u hoa'aloha maika'i, Mahalo, William

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/20/2023 4:16:00 PM

Very clever write my friend. I see how you took the ending words of lines to weave into the ending line of every stanza. I feel the tenor of Poe and style of Plath--a difficult write, you executed well with the repeating sound of "the hour."

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/20/2023 4:54:00 PM

Ahh, Poe enjoyed to end his write of it, evermore. Alas, Vijay, manipulation forced the usage of some forward lines to replace their ending lines that was of some length. I am forever indebted to your ceaseless kindness, my friend, Aloha, William