Turning Clouds Into Fog

Flying upwards high Seeing clouds everywhere free Making fog below Russell Sivey

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/21/2011 9:35:00 AM

,Good morning,~ Russell ~ how are you this wonderful Friday :-) morning... As for me, I'm missing everyone I know here on the soup PLUS more. *glad we are back up*. By the way I'm also stopping by to read a couple of poems OR commenting the ones I could not all week or yesterday, after being shut out for them awful few days..ENJOYED YOUR POEM, thank you for sharing! Take care and have yourself a wonderful Friday~ ;-) Always,..p.d.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 10/21/2011 3:49:00 AM

This has a spiritual feel to it. Nicely done.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/20/2011 10:30:00 PM

Scientifically witty, Russell. Nice senryu. Gwendolen