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The apricot sunlight of an early fall afternoon caresses an empty picnic table. A still pine forest exhales, expending its essence on the rising moon. Walkers warm in fleece pace, each stride distressing the fallen needles, and the wayward squirrel nut in cheek. Geese attend the lake’s edge, their arched necks appearing to question each wayward breeze which disturbs the still waters of the pond. The playground now empty of its wiggling little ones, sighs forlornly, as its chains are aired in a whistle-like concord. So, the day ends at the golden hour, peacefully, awaiting the turning of the maples leafs. *The fine line is between the end of summer and the beginning of fall.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/3/2011 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:47:00 PM
You are an artist with a pen(or key board?) or a juggler with the words!!Congratulations Debbie on your win.
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Date: 10/1/2011 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Debbie
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Date: 10/1/2011 2:29:00 AM
Beautifully written, Deb. I felt like I was watching all of this with you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/1/2011 1:09:00 AM
Beautifully written, I really enjoyed this poem. Excellent. Lee
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Date: 9/30/2011 8:52:00 PM
Love your word combinations and the way they dance lightly on either side of the line! Another first-class poem, Debbie, thanks so much for supporting my contest. Beauty weekend to ya, Namaste~N
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/1/2011 8:49:00 AM
Thanks Nan I bless the Light in YOU too!
Date: 9/27/2011 9:54:00 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Debbie. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/23/2011 3:04:00 PM
Enjoyed this easy write you have created Debbi, i shall have to take a country walk now i have read this..
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Date: 9/21/2011 6:18:00 AM
soup mail..
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Date: 9/21/2011 12:15:00 AM
Delightful imagery.
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Date: 9/20/2011 9:16:00 PM
This is lovely Debbie, so visual, I felt I was there. I want to thank you so much for the Honorable Mention in your Children contest, I am very proud and honored to be among these wonderful poems and fine poets ~~
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Date: 9/20/2011 7:50:00 PM
wow mesmerizing and intoxicating lines Debbie.. a brilliant portrait painted with this dynamic poetry ..luv the flow and the grace of this piece luv...
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