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Turbulence

off course arrows blown shattering glass against stone… forbidden love known

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2011 2:27:00 PM
so interesting and provocative! I can see the whole story but then again i was both an archer and a forbidden love. Light & Love
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Date: 2/15/2011 6:14:00 AM
Damn right with this one. Excellent!
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Date: 2/14/2011 7:30:00 AM
Nice senryu, but you want "course" in lieu of "coarse" in the first line.
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