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Tunnel of Love

Ready or not can't escape this ride or the escalating surge as the body leaves the pride without a last word ... traveling swiftly through inky darkness toward a brillant light off in the distance ... no more tears, no fright flying ever forward where the brightness begins to take up my life and the tunnel of love removes all strife as the I and Me and Mine disappear in the bright becoming the Light ... becoming the Love ... for all eternity.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/11/2009 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful poem Sue, a delight to read>>James
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Date: 7/10/2009 2:32:00 AM
Beautiful I loved it ... Jayne x
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Date: 6/30/2009 11:54:00 AM
this is beautiful. I just read the book "90 minutes in heaven" and this write reminds me of the things that were written in the book about heaven and what it would be like when we arrive there........ very nice, alopez
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:39:00 AM
LOVE THIS!ND THE TITLE TOTALLY SUITES XD
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Date: 6/29/2009 4:25:00 PM
nice smooth beauty! Sue, good work, jim
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:46:00 PM
the moving from one world to the other might be as simple as this. john loving
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:15:00 PM
"..or the escalating surge as the body leaves the pride". Well put.
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