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Tumbling Demise

tumbling demise a painted leaf folds in prayer a new season born....

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Skat A

Date: 5/23/2015 11:40:00 AM

this haiku will be my muse for the haiku contest I'm thinking of running. ------> Picture painted perfect <---- A stunning haiku to be set with amazing imagery to come ..skat

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2010 6:46:00 AM

Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already ^Rick. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2010 6:54:00 AM

Many congratulations Rick on your win in Carol's fine contest with this lovely Haiku >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2010 8:09:00 PM

gosh, this is so nice. It seems to go with a contest about a falling leaf but that one was a long time ago!! Luv, Andrea

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/5/2010 6:41:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL HAIKU. lOVE, jOYCE

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2010 5:29:00 PM

Congrats on the win, Rick

John Freeman

Date: 8/5/2010 4:55:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your presentation and presentation in Carol's awesome contest. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/5/2010 1:35:00 PM

Congrats Rick on your winning Haiku in Carol's contest .. amazing words.. superior quality my friend.. and so happy to be sharing 9th place with u .. enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/5/2010 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Kris Walters

Date: 8/3/2010 6:47:00 PM

Beautifully done Haiku- the stillness, the moment captured, the sense of ah... There it is, Autumn. Lovely, kris

Linda Milgate

Date: 8/3/2010 12:41:00 PM

lovely image