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Tulips

spring spreads special spell butterflies and birds flutter ~ tulips undulate wind carries magic tall tulips tell taunting tales ~ pollen fairy dust
15th February 2023 (howmanysyllables.com used) For Tania Kitchin's "Spring Flower, Bird or Butterfly Haiku x 2" contest

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Date: 3/6/2023 10:45:00 PM
I like the illiteration in your poem, its imagery is lovely. "Pollen Fairy dust" How dainty and maybe glittery. My daughter made fairy houses as a child. This line made me think of fairies and smile. I had pink tulips at my wedding. Another nice memory your poem brought me. This was delightful and fun to read outloud. I liked it so much.
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Date: 2/27/2023 3:10:00 AM
I have read your winning entry and enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 2/25/2023 8:12:00 PM
Indeed, a great haiku on tulips. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2023 12:34:00 PM
- My father's favorite flower ... beautifully written :) - Congratulations on a 2nd place in the contest, Jo :) - hugs
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Date: 2/25/2023 12:11:00 PM
This is lovely, Jo: Love the idea of pollen as fairy dust. SuZ
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Date: 2/25/2023 10:15:00 AM
Jo, this haiku is magic and tells of the magic of spring! Lovely enchantment in your lines and alliterations. Congratulations. Blessings!
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Date: 2/25/2023 8:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful red tulip write/picture. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away..........................
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Date: 2/25/2023 7:56:00 AM
Nice alliteration Jo! Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 2/25/2023 4:38:00 AM
Congratulations for your win :)
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Date: 2/25/2023 3:50:00 AM
Jo, a wonderful set of haiku's, tulips are a welcomed sign of Spring, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Date: 2/16/2023 12:23:00 PM
Jo, your haiku's are beautiful, best of luck in the contest, blessings Constance, PS, I sent you a soupmail
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Date: 2/15/2023 9:14:00 AM
Enjoyed this, Jo. Great feelings and metaphors. Win big
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Date: 2/15/2023 1:33:00 AM
Strange tulips survive just one year in Malta because the soil is warm. Otherwise great haikus. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/14/2023 10:24:00 PM
Love this, great feeling and imagery. Bless you
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