Ttyl

TTYL I am the love that I wish to see Reflected in my lover’s eyes Back to me. I am the love that the world can see Mirrored in compassion and Integrity. Love you totally true. I am the love for all to see Not backwards encoded In secrecy. To everyone else it’s friendly talk But without the truth just Hidden under a rock. Love you totally true. I am the love that grows in me Lifting the barriers of Divine destiny. The love of my lover I will to be Across days, years, lifetimes And the Centuries, Love you totally true.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2016 4:56:00 PM

AHA, it's mirrored, the title , so TTYL must be Love you totally true. How cool this is!!!

Phil Capitano
Date: 5/30/2016 9:38:00 AM

Well done, Andrea, that's the 'backwards encoded' part; note also the words 'reflected' and 'mirror' in the first verse. It's a double entendre but goodbye either way. Your friend PC.

Becca Teagan

Date: 5/28/2016 11:57:00 PM

this is such a sweet poem :) Love you totally true :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 5/27/2016 1:57:00 PM

Hello Phil, Another quite beautiful and meaningful write here. Great technique here with the repeating last verse at the end of each stanza. Keep writing and doing all the great work you're doing with your poetry. I do like your style for sure!! TR/FAV on this one!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Phil Capitano
Date: 5/27/2016 2:47:00 PM

Thanks for your support and kind words; always great to have a fan. Namaste.

Tim Smith

Date: 5/26/2016 10:51:00 AM

Excellent piece Phil....across days ,years ...a love that is true...beautiful words